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Without ropes
Cold steel
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Cuts the ropes ...
Where should I go?
Author's Note
Okay, I know this isn't a Senryu, so I just call it Krisenryu... :)
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Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 9:12pm
An unconstrained BDSM poem ... I love it ... on many levels ... nice crisp write ... had me rereading ... seeing it from new angles ... great write dear poetess ...
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5th May 2021 9:26pm
Hey LDF! I see we think so much alike. ;) Even though it's short there are a lot of angles to this one. Really happy you could connect with and see them... Thank you so much for the comment! ⛓️🌙
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5th May 2021 9:42pm
Really glad you could feel it with me Lj! ;) I like the sound of Legit girl too...
Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 9:34pm
Go anywhere you like sweetie. Run wild and free. Find whatever you desire.
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Great read
Love and light
Ron x
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Great read
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 9:53pm
Hey Ron! Thank you for the super sweet message.
Always wild, not sure ever quite free but wild and bound with the right binding can be really fun! ;) I am really happy you thought it was a great read. x ⛓️🌙
Always wild, not sure ever quite free but wild and bound with the right binding can be really fun! ;) I am really happy you thought it was a great read. x ⛓️🌙
Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 10:00pm
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5th May 2021 10:07pm
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5th May 2021 10:12pm
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5th May 2021 10:21pm
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5th May 2021 11:31pm
I'd like to take you to the beach, corny as it may be, 6:18 sunrise tomorrow. Then we can go walking on ones of the sand trails near by. There are cute moments along the path that I could steal a look and you would know the thought.
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6th May 2021 1:29am
I do love the beach and that is some really nice imagery. I can imagine the thoughts. ;)
Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 10:14pm
The realization that you are free to go, but you can't. The veil of being captive is lifted.
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Re: Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 10:27pm
Still captive without chains and ropes, yes... Sometimes other things keep us there. :) or fear. The veil is lifted but there is another underneath... ⛓️🌙
Re. Without ropes
5th May 2021 10:36pm
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5th May 2021 10:45pm
You know me to well Penguinphile. Cuffs are fun! Having no control (or maybe having all the control). ;) ⛓️🌙
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5th May 2021 11:08pm
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6th May 2021 12:41pm
Re. Without ropes
Perfect in every way
RL AWARD for brevity and message
You'll always need Control, don't wander too far he said....
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RL AWARD for brevity and message
You'll always need Control, don't wander too far he said....
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Re: Re. Without ropes
Thanks Poetspeak. Not sure what to say...
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and RL award. Well I like not being in control sometimes, but still going to push the boundaries. ;) ⛓️🌙
Like the Like.
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment and RL award. Well I like not being in control sometimes, but still going to push the boundaries. ;) ⛓️🌙
Like the Like.
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Re: Re. Without ropes
6th May 2021 12:40pm
Hey Chris 🥓! Some cuts do feel good, life's painful pleasures... Super short for me and I am really happy you like it! ;) (and I love
bacon)
bacon)
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🥓🥓 That sounds like the logic here in the South! ;) (with some exceptions) 🥓🥓
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Re. Without ropes
6th May 2021 2:55am
You are a strong beautiful sexy woman who needs to pampered. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Without ropes
6th May 2021 12:38pm
Hey Francisco! Thanks for the very sweet message. Sometimes I don't feel so strong but I am dealing with a lot so I guess I am. Pampering sounds really good right now though...
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7th May 2021 12:59pm
Re. Without ropes
3rd Jul 2021 10:17pm
You break free and suddenly the mind is liberated with so many places to go...hmm.
Hot little write.
Hot little write.
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Re: Re. Without ropes
6th Jul 2021 4:07pm
The sky is the limit... so many places to go while still at times you just want to bound and dominated. ;) Really happy you liked my little KriSenryu Wally. ⛓️🌙