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clever, the muse
your rhymes are so sweet, my precious muse
how could any man refuse
the idea of wet,
moist i am sure, i would bet.
for you to be a muse...
the chance i would not dare to lose.
but if i could put a spell
i might conjure up, at my will
the possession of your mind,
let it take me on a trip,
a path that would be curvy and that would wind.
take me to your imagination...
tell me of your head, and that drinkable wine.
let me earn,
let me learn,
how all your sweetness could produce, what i might yearn.
how could any man refuse
the idea of wet,
moist i am sure, i would bet.
for you to be a muse...
the chance i would not dare to lose.
but if i could put a spell
i might conjure up, at my will
the possession of your mind,
let it take me on a trip,
a path that would be curvy and that would wind.
take me to your imagination...
tell me of your head, and that drinkable wine.
let me earn,
let me learn,
how all your sweetness could produce, what i might yearn.
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Re. clever, the muse
Anonymous
5th May 2021 5:46pm
Nice!!
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Re. clever, the muse
Enjoyed this sensual and passionate write, ms.
Your smooth rhymes allow for a decadence that imbues the sexy feel I derive... it's like an incognito sultry and I am all about soaking it up...;)
Ty for sharing, my dear 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
Your smooth rhymes allow for a decadence that imbues the sexy feel I derive... it's like an incognito sultry and I am all about soaking it up...;)
Ty for sharing, my dear 🙏🏻
🌹-💙
xo
B
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Re: Re. clever, the muse
5th May 2021 9:14pm
don't know if i am developing a style
thank you for noting all the little details.
i am obviously blind to what i write.
but it is the clever of the muse
that seems to fuel my fuse.
...i say with a returning wink...
thank you for noting all the little details.
i am obviously blind to what i write.
but it is the clever of the muse
that seems to fuel my fuse.
...i say with a returning wink...
Re. clever, the muse
6th Aug 2021 10:28pm
“the possession of your mind”
“take me to your imagination”
Not just physical lust
Awesome
NG
“take me to your imagination”
Not just physical lust
Awesome
NG
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Re: Re. clever, the muse
7th Aug 2021 11:53am
Thanks for reading and commenting.
the mind surly starts all lust...intensifying even physical lust.
thank you again
the mind surly starts all lust...intensifying even physical lust.
thank you again
Re. clever, the muse
9th Aug 2021 1:44pm
Great poem! Thanks for sharing your talent, have a write day. Hugs and peace, O
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Re: Re. clever, the muse
9th Aug 2021 1:46pm
Re. clever, the muse
Anonymous
11th Aug 2021 12:30pm
This one's a few months old, but I don't think you were lonely back then.😊
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Re: Re. clever, the muse
11th Aug 2021 1:42pm
Thanks for reading and commenting.
i understand lonely.
i understand loneliness.
i tend to accept it as part of life...it seems to wane and wax.
but upon the mind it seems to tax.
a kind of emptiness it surly does not lack.
i understand lonely.
i understand loneliness.
i tend to accept it as part of life...it seems to wane and wax.
but upon the mind it seems to tax.
a kind of emptiness it surly does not lack.
Re. clever, the muse
Anonymous
30th Oct 2021 5:35pm
Bravo!!!
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Re: Re. clever, the muse
5th Apr 2023 3:55am
nothing more precious than a sweet muse.
thank you for reading the lines
and taking from the page..
learning is the treasure, a journey.
such does the muse afford to the poet...
a trust in giving, a must.
Brandy,
thank you for taking notice.
thank you for reading the lines
and taking from the page..
learning is the treasure, a journey.
such does the muse afford to the poet...
a trust in giving, a must.
Brandy,
thank you for taking notice.