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Warring Entities
Broken sleep
Broken dreams
Parts of life
Or so it seems
Life or death
Chariot or hearse
For better or worse
Blessed or cursed
Having home turf
Or visiting team
Value self-worth
Or low self-esteem
Losing steam
Or full of vigor
Faith redeemed
Or pull the trigger
Broken dreams
Parts of life
Or so it seems
Life or death
Chariot or hearse
For better or worse
Blessed or cursed
Having home turf
Or visiting team
Value self-worth
Or low self-esteem
Losing steam
Or full of vigor
Faith redeemed
Or pull the trigger
Published 4th May 2021
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4th May 2021 4:48am
4th May 2021 5:24am
Dear D,
I found myself nodding my head vigorously as I read your poem. Warring entities indeed. Some choices can be so difficult to make and it’s nice to know there might be a guardian angel of some sort lending a guiding hand. Great write. H🌷
I found myself nodding my head vigorously as I read your poem. Warring entities indeed. Some choices can be so difficult to make and it’s nice to know there might be a guardian angel of some sort lending a guiding hand. Great write. H🌷
4th May 2021 11:09am
14th May 2021 4:40pm
3rd Jul 2021 5:49pm
It reminds of the line from Shawshank Redemption, "Get busy living, or get busy dying".
Powerful stuff sir.
Powerful stuff sir.
