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Writer's Block
Be it the death
of the writer
with pieces unwritten
the ego does suffer.
Words beg to be woven
in the heart of the reader
dance with their breath
pause moments;
linger.
The writer still seated,
another short whisky, please!
Eyes locked on paper
neat, white and clean.
Published 2nd May 2021
Author's Note
instead of writing I wrote this
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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2nd May 2021 2:16pm
Love this ... my go to poetry prompt when I have writer's block ... writer's block itself ... nicely penned ...
2nd May 2021 2:24pm
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2nd May 2021 3:39pm
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2nd May 2021 4:45pm
5th May 2021 7:58pm
Hello there.
Firstly, welcome to DU :)
I really loved the flow of this piece. I like to read all pieces out loud when I am reading them, and this one was effortless on the tongue. The grammatical pause between pause moments & linger was really quite lovely. Makes the reader stop and take a breath in readiness for what comes next.
Beautiful little offering this one. Thank you for sharing.
-M
Firstly, welcome to DU :)
I really loved the flow of this piece. I like to read all pieces out loud when I am reading them, and this one was effortless on the tongue. The grammatical pause between pause moments & linger was really quite lovely. Makes the reader stop and take a breath in readiness for what comes next.
Beautiful little offering this one. Thank you for sharing.
-M
6th May 2021 3:17pm
Hello @Northern_Soul thank you for your kind and thorough comment. I am happy to be here; welcoming community. I appreciate you. warmly, ursa
29th Aug 2021 1:56pm
I have been facing writer's block for a long time now... So it's quite relatable....
Beautifully penned piece.... Love the choice of words :)
Beautifully penned piece.... Love the choice of words :)
29th Aug 2021 5:09pm
@InDeamz thank you for stopping by and for commenting.
sincerely appreciate it. hope you're keeping well.
warmly, ursa 💜
sincerely appreciate it. hope you're keeping well.
warmly, ursa 💜
