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Why Don't They?
Why don't they hear me
I'm screaming out loud
But it's as if I'm silent
In the sea of the crowd.
Why don't they see me
I'm right fucking there
To me it seems as if
No one cares.
Why don't they help me
Can't they see the scars
To them I must be merely
A shadow with a broken heart.
All I want is for them
To see that I'm in trouble
And for someone to help me
Get out of the rubble.
I'm screaming out loud
But it's as if I'm silent
In the sea of the crowd.
Why don't they see me
I'm right fucking there
To me it seems as if
No one cares.
Why don't they help me
Can't they see the scars
To them I must be merely
A shadow with a broken heart.
All I want is for them
To see that I'm in trouble
And for someone to help me
Get out of the rubble.
Published 17th Feb 2012
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18th Feb 2012 11:45am
18th Feb 2012 9:50pm
Grace is right..
No one cares untill its to late.
Or mabey its that everyone feels invisable and their to wrapped in their own problems to even notice somethings wrong..
Anyways great write hun
No one cares untill its to late.
Or mabey its that everyone feels invisable and their to wrapped in their own problems to even notice somethings wrong..
Anyways great write hun
19th Feb 2012 3:28am
we aren't invisible, we're just good at hiding what's inside. They aren't the same thing. Great write though.
We scream we shout,but who cares when no one cares about nothing but themselves, but I hear you sister
