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Let It Flow / That Wee Knowledge

What better sense of relief could there be,
than as that
of releasing
a pent up piss?

Sure,
there may be longer moments of rapture
and other times of belly laughter,
but bladder reprieve
is a universal thing.

An emptying of the self
in the moment
and sense of Zen awareness
as you release
and realize
just how pent up
you have been,
and how necessary it is
to let it flow away:
to let it all go.
Written by Viddax (Lord Viddax)
Published
Author's Note
Entry 28 for NaPoWriMo2021.

A comment I made on the wonderful poem "Said the Buddha to toilet mobility handles" by Northern_Soul, that with a tweak turned into a poem. https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/417565-said-the-buddha-to-toilet-mobility/
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