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Butand
if you think they’re perfect,
but
then move on
don’t stay don’t plan
to fix the ‘but’
if you think they’re perfect.
stay awhile
move on
if you discover
a ‘but’
if you think they’re perfect,
‘and’
commit to stay
to enjoy
the ‘ands’
no if’s
ands
or buts
about it
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
but
then move on
don’t stay don’t plan
to fix the ‘but’
if you think they’re perfect.
stay awhile
move on
if you discover
a ‘but’
if you think they’re perfect,
‘and’
commit to stay
to enjoy
the ‘ands’
no if’s
ands
or buts
about it
© 2021 Raibeart Bruis
Published 15th Apr 2021
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15th Apr 2021 8:26pm
How clever ... I love poetry that plays with words ... creates new ones ... a definite keeper ...
16th Apr 2021 1:40am
15th Apr 2021 9:21pm
What an intellectual musing, which gave me eh pleasure to read twice.. and in the end, each time it make absolutely perfect sense, how ingenious of you.. and last, it does fit the expression the no if's ands buts about it accordingly .. well I'll be...
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