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T-SHIRT
on me
it's just a T
but when she dons it for sleep
it's a holy garment
worn by an angel
and cut just so
that one glimpses heaven
and it's blessed curves
and sacred curls
and simple flesh
becomes radiant
and every movement,
holy
and every step
a sacred dance
and this,
our ritual
and that,
our altar
and us
priest and priestess,
god and goddess,
light
and brighter still
it's just a T
but when she dons it for sleep
it's a holy garment
worn by an angel
and cut just so
that one glimpses heaven
and it's blessed curves
and sacred curls
and simple flesh
becomes radiant
and every movement,
holy
and every step
a sacred dance
and this,
our ritual
and that,
our altar
and us
priest and priestess,
god and goddess,
light
and brighter still
Published 11th Apr 2021
| Edited 12th Apr 2021
Author's Note
Choosing a category, I couldn't decide between love poems, erotic poems, or spiritual poems. Sometimes it seems all the same.
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11th Apr 2021 3:57pm
Love wearing my man's T ... its comforting looseness ... his scent ... *sigh* ...
11th Apr 2021 6:57pm
Thanks for reading, L. I'm glad my poem evoked happy thoughts.
Your comment is much appreciated.
Your comment is much appreciated.
11th Apr 2021 4:12pm
Dear J,
I think it’s a mix of all the categories. The one most for me is romantic, or better blinded by love. I think a good portion of us would like to be thought of in this manner. And the romance behind this write takes me to a really lovely spot. Lovely write. H 🌷
I think it’s a mix of all the categories. The one most for me is romantic, or better blinded by love. I think a good portion of us would like to be thought of in this manner. And the romance behind this write takes me to a really lovely spot. Lovely write. H 🌷
11th Apr 2021 6:59pm
I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem, H. And thank you for your thoughtful comment.
J.
J.
11th Apr 2021 11:43pm
Just the perfect amount of erotic, sexy and romantic as they all can also be spiritual experiences, I feel your conundrum. This was a write that I'm totally jealous of....
... not because of it's expertise (which it totally is) because you are that committed to your partner in life.... making this piece so very coveted, imo.
So very well done.
I hope you let your wife read this one...
Lol...
All my warmest regards,
🌹
x
B
... not because of it's expertise (which it totally is) because you are that committed to your partner in life.... making this piece so very coveted, imo.
So very well done.
I hope you let your wife read this one...
Lol...
All my warmest regards,
🌹
x
B
12th Apr 2021 2:37pm
Thank you, Blue.
I think marriage is a practice. It's a learned, multi-faceted skill.
How is that for romance?
But it is worth it.
The rewards are plentiful.
Thanks so much for your thoughtful (and thought provoking) comment.
J.
I think marriage is a practice. It's a learned, multi-faceted skill.
How is that for romance?
But it is worth it.
The rewards are plentiful.
Thanks so much for your thoughtful (and thought provoking) comment.
J.
