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Alone
Alone in darkness
Reflecting
Deeply burdened
Questioning
A social butterfly
Once vibrant
Confident and fun
Yet, she's alone
Ambitious high achiever
Supportive and strong
Secure, she belonged
Yet, she's alone
Self-assured
Fearless
Courageous
Yes, she's alone
Impacted by trauma
Altering her future
Total transformation
She chooses to be alone
The darkness condenses
Exacerbating her sorrow
Desperate for answers
By choice, she's alone
Reflecting
Deeply burdened
Questioning
A social butterfly
Once vibrant
Confident and fun
Yet, she's alone
Ambitious high achiever
Supportive and strong
Secure, she belonged
Yet, she's alone
Self-assured
Fearless
Courageous
Yes, she's alone
Impacted by trauma
Altering her future
Total transformation
She chooses to be alone
The darkness condenses
Exacerbating her sorrow
Desperate for answers
By choice, she's alone
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Re. Alone
10th Apr 2021 4:17pm
I enjoyed this because it does illustrate the contrast between positive and negative elements denoting a true struggle in one's life. Pivoting that alone into solitude gives an edge of desire to learn before venturing out into intimate associations. The only way we truly learn is through solitude and exploration of self without distraction or demands for our attention from others.
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11th Apr 2021 2:48pm
Re. Alone
10th Apr 2021 5:18pm
Sometimes those are the hardest choices, I've learned. To be alone for the right reasons, rather then being with someone for the wrong. I really really empathize there. I look at this poem from my personal perspective and I see similar shades so clearly. It's pure strength, commitment and dedication to one's own self, tinged with a scintilla of fear (in my case) that's shaped my aloneness. I feel your multitude of emotions... traveling across the page
An outstanding write and I thank you for sharing it.
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-B
An outstanding write and I thank you for sharing it.
🌹
-B
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11th Apr 2021 2:48pm
Re. Alone
11th Apr 2021 6:18am
You need to find a person who understands you, sometimes be alone for little bit can be a good thing. You also need companionship to feel loved. Keep on writing.
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12th Apr 2021 5:46am
Re. Alone
15th Apr 2021 1:29am
I like what you wrote here. Alone sometimes can be better, just not lengthy time periods perhaps?
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Re. Alone
21st Apr 2021 1:41pm
Ambitious high achiever. With respect, maybe she expect tooooooo much and maybe that is why she is alone.
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23rd Apr 2021 12:11pm
Re. Alone
28th Apr 2021 7:49am
Re. Alone
28th Apr 2021 2:31pm
Yes, by choice we can be alone, in a crowd, or with another person. Great poem and reminder. Hugs and peace, oral
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Re. Alone
6th May 2021 12:28pm
Reminds me of the Kierkegaard quote:
'I have just now come from a party where I was its life and soul; witticisms streamed from my lips, everyone laughed and admired me, but I went away and wanted to shoot myself'.
'I have just now come from a party where I was its life and soul; witticisms streamed from my lips, everyone laughed and admired me, but I went away and wanted to shoot myself'.
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Re. Alone
1st Jan 2022 3:43am