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Deliguescing over a waning Fire
call me butter; I am on a roll
spread me apart; rip me into 2
jam my heart – flay me with
berries rasp – ‘n – blue
alas, I utter!
alone and wet
donning cold-cuts
over my sweat
drowning in Arizona’s heat
melting like butter, anew
no radiator’s coolant
no more other
&
no more You
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Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
6th Apr 2021 11:02pm
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6th Apr 2021 11:03pm
Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
Anonymous
7th Apr 2021 6:35pm
"call me butter; I am on a roll
spread me apart; rip me into 2"
That's pretty clever there, well done.☺️
spread me apart; rip me into 2"
That's pretty clever there, well done.☺️
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Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
7th Apr 2021 6:37pm
Delighted to entertain!
You caused me to smile -- thank You
appreciate Your read and share
You caused me to smile -- thank You
appreciate Your read and share
Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
8th Apr 2021 10:50pm
Awww... that ending! .... I enjoyed your world play and I giggled, at the butter line as well ☺
Ty for sharing, T
Much love and positive thoughts your way,
🌹
xo
B
Ty for sharing, T
Much love and positive thoughts your way,
🌹
xo
B
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Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
8th Apr 2021 10:54pm
Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
10th Apr 2021 4:07pm
Fun poetic read ... just what I needed for a rainy gloomy Bama morning ...
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10th Apr 2021 4:09pm
Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
12th Apr 2021 9:47pm
The depth and of feeling here I can relate. The overwhelming feelings of loss can and do subside, but they never leave, they are integrated into our being forevermore.
Thank you for the read. And, I sincerely hope for relief for you.
Thank you for the read. And, I sincerely hope for relief for you.
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13th Apr 2021 5:12pm
Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
Anonymous
19th Apr 2021 5:47pm
This for me felt quite brutal to read. Because I know this sadness all to well. I feel rather bitter at the moment with life. This just spoke so much for me.
jam my heart – flay me with
berries rasp – ‘n – blue
Gosh my heart right now feels in pieces
I loved this
Gwen
jam my heart – flay me with
berries rasp – ‘n – blue
Gosh my heart right now feels in pieces
I loved this
Gwen
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Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
19th Apr 2021 8:48pm
am so sorry to hear You are still feeling this type of spill
but happy You found this spill and liked it if only in a relatable way
appreciate Your read and share
be patient with time passing. . .
but happy You found this spill and liked it if only in a relatable way
appreciate Your read and share
be patient with time passing. . .
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2021 10:19pm
Thank you, I almost wish time would move faster right now
Gwen
Gwen
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Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
Honored for the RL add
( the song, Lady Antebellum - Need You Now, just came on on my You Tube reel and i am in effin tears..........!! i hate myself when i get this way but i can't stop. When WE love someone so freakin' much............
damn me damn me daaaaaaaaaaamn!!!
( the song, Lady Antebellum - Need You Now, just came on on my You Tube reel and i am in effin tears..........!! i hate myself when i get this way but i can't stop. When WE love someone so freakin' much............
damn me damn me daaaaaaaaaaamn!!!
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2021 8:55pm
Am right there with you ❤️ For over a week now all I can do is breakdown and cry. Everything sets me off. I feel so broken inside and can’t seem to piece myself together. Writing has become so hard like my brain has died inside and I can’t motivate myself
I hate feeling because it just keeps hurting
Sending you empathised hugs xoxo
I hate feeling because it just keeps hurting
Sending you empathised hugs xoxo
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Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
21st Apr 2021 9:23pm
Just know that if we continue to Feel, we are still sitting on the ledge
and not ready to hop
Perhaps a collaboration spill about healing?
Not certain if You're ready for a collab spill but just bringing up the idea.
and not ready to hop
Perhaps a collaboration spill about healing?
Not certain if You're ready for a collab spill but just bringing up the idea.
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2021 9:29pm
That might be helpful my friend thank you 🙏 x
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Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
25th Apr 2021 5:39pm
Re: Re. Deliguescing over a waning Fire
25th Apr 2021 5:42pm
i ain't going anywhere
as my Mom and Sister are still alive
but after they're done and gone..............sky's the limit
as my Mom and Sister are still alive
but after they're done and gone..............sky's the limit
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
24th Jul 2021 6:55pm
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