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Warm Love
I fall back lazily on the bed
positioned perpendicular to how things should go
so as to better soak up the sun through bay windows streaked subtly with fingerling tracings from the night before.
Just there, imprints from the moment you pressed into me from behind
only glass separating me from star-strewn sky.
And there, tell-tale trails of your eventual taking of it all—this body and the night sky, too.
‘Warm love’, sent after leaving the next day
words mustering the precise temperature of ‘just right’—the heat of the night cooled to simmering bodies wrapped in casual intimacy ‘round every little and big thing that is us.
Through handprinted love, the sun and you become one.
(Oh, how the sun becomes you, Love.)
And I settle into the (after)glow.
Rays embracing all that is me and all
that is ‘we’ until nothing else remains.
Just radiant, warm love.
It is more than enough.
R.
positioned perpendicular to how things should go
so as to better soak up the sun through bay windows streaked subtly with fingerling tracings from the night before.
Just there, imprints from the moment you pressed into me from behind
only glass separating me from star-strewn sky.
And there, tell-tale trails of your eventual taking of it all—this body and the night sky, too.
‘Warm love’, sent after leaving the next day
words mustering the precise temperature of ‘just right’—the heat of the night cooled to simmering bodies wrapped in casual intimacy ‘round every little and big thing that is us.
Through handprinted love, the sun and you become one.
(Oh, how the sun becomes you, Love.)
And I settle into the (after)glow.
Rays embracing all that is me and all
that is ‘we’ until nothing else remains.
Just radiant, warm love.
It is more than enough.
R.
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Re. Warm Love
6th Apr 2021 2:39pm
This is an absolutely beautiful offering, Rachelle. The tenderness is achingly palpable.
Well done in capturing a moment without ruining it with words!
Well done in capturing a moment without ruining it with words!
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7th Apr 2021 4:58am
Thank you! Sometimes, it seems the little vignettes seem to write themselves... 💜🙏🏽...
R.
R.
Re. Warm Love
9th Apr 2021 5:00am
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11th Apr 2021 5:37am
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21st Apr 2021 4:55pm
Re. Warm Love
21st Apr 2021 3:15pm
Thanks for wonderfully scripted poem of love and its memories..the moments can be ephemeral but not the memories..they stay for eternity..the touch..the smell..keep the hot ink burning and let the heart pine for more
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21st Apr 2021 5:50pm
So very true! Love the tie in to sensory memories... they never die. 🙏🏽 💗, R.
Re. Warm Love
17th May 2021 6:18pm
I thoroughly enjoyed the surreal offering of this verse, it almost seemed like a dream only to realize it was the recalling of the night before.
"Rays embracing all that is me and all
that is ‘we’ until nothing else remains." Paints a lovely picture.
Outstanding work Rachelle.
"Rays embracing all that is me and all
that is ‘we’ until nothing else remains." Paints a lovely picture.
Outstanding work Rachelle.
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5th Jun 2021 6:49am
Just came back to revisit this one and saw I missed your sweet words. So glad it landed for you. A little vignette playing at the edge of the surreal...pst together a series of those and I guess we could about sum up life 😉... 🙏🏽💜, R.
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20th Jun 2021 6:51am
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Re. Warm Love
3rd Aug 2021 5:56am
Sensuous write of a lone post coital scene. Favourite lines:
Just there, imprints from the moment you pressed into me from behind
only glass separating me from star-strewn sky.
And there, tell-tale trails of your eventual taking of it all—this body and the night sky, too.
Just there, imprints from the moment you pressed into me from behind
only glass separating me from star-strewn sky.
And there, tell-tale trails of your eventual taking of it all—this body and the night sky, too.
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14th Aug 2021 4:44am
Re. Warm Love
3rd Aug 2021 6:28pm
At mid-read, I never thought before I better put some spf on.
Endearing, intimate and sunny write. 😎
Endearing, intimate and sunny write. 😎
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14th Aug 2021 4:44am
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Re: Re. Warm Love
11th Sep 2021 11:11pm
Ahhh! Just seeing this sweet comment-Thank you so much. Looking forward to checking out your ink. 💜😘💜, Rachelle
Re. Warm Love
14th Sep 2021 4:57am
I love this. This is how erotic writing is supposed to be done. The window, body heat, night sky, breaths, sun and making love 😘
Perfect!
Perfect!
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8th Jul 2022 2:40pm