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Anchored
red cheeks in the cold
warming eyes opening my heart
wider than the sky
a beauty beyond measure
she anchors my very soul
warming eyes opening my heart
wider than the sky
a beauty beyond measure
she anchors my very soul
Published 5th Apr 2021
| Edited 6th Apr 2021
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5th Apr 2021 7:45pm
Ohhh my...... *actual swoon*....
I missed the ability to post comments on your poems that inspire me...You are positively radiant, in this stunner of a tanka, C... sigh... it's just so heartfelt and romantic. Your wording and phrases always leave me breathless.
Masterful.
period.
(don't deny it!!!)
lol
Much love and respect beyond measure,
💜
xoxo
-S
I missed the ability to post comments on your poems that inspire me...You are positively radiant, in this stunner of a tanka, C... sigh... it's just so heartfelt and romantic. Your wording and phrases always leave me breathless.
Masterful.
period.
(don't deny it!!!)
lol
Much love and respect beyond measure,
💜
xoxo
-S
5th Apr 2021 8:28pm
Damnit Brother!!
Your Feel knows NO bounds!
this spill is exquisitely intimate and sensual.
O how i wish You and my ex could wander about and meet................
Your Feel knows NO bounds!
this spill is exquisitely intimate and sensual.
O how i wish You and my ex could wander about and meet................
5th Apr 2021 9:09pm
I too have missed your poems ... a nice romantic penning ... sweet ... uplifting ... like love is supposed to be ...
5th Apr 2021 9:24pm
Anonymous
5th Apr 2021 10:56pm
Touching and beautiful..
6th Apr 2021 10:51pm
Anonymous
9th Apr 2021 12:43pm
She anchors my very soul! WOW you are the master of short poems that hold such intense and wondrous messages and feelings. This is packed with beauty
Gwen :) x
Gwen :) x
