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love and fear

all my wife and
I want is to live �
as long as we can �
be together �
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Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 3rd Apr 2021

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Re. love and fear

3rd Apr 2021 00:28am

Love it, Paul. It reads two ways, and I adored the second the best. To you and the Mrs. ♥️ ♥️

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3rd Apr 2021 00:33am

yes it's the 'be together' that matters

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3rd Apr 2021 00:34am

Yes; those types of surprise enjambments are the best, imho.

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Re. love and fear

3rd Apr 2021 1:30am

Dear P,

Cheers and here here to that! Many more years to you both. H 🌷

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Re. love and fear

3rd Apr 2021 11:29pm

The most basic aspect of our existence.
Well done.

regards,
buddhakitty.

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