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Jagged Thoughts from the Underbelly
Crawling inside your confidence
Tender coupling
Treating you kindly
Roughness no more
Until kindness is monotony
Pain being the happy pill
The whip is madness
It's home by the fire and sacrifice
Tender coupling
Treating you kindly
Roughness no more
Until kindness is monotony
Pain being the happy pill
The whip is madness
It's home by the fire and sacrifice
Author's Note
Original Digital Image by Poetspeak
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Re. Jagged Thoughts from the Underbelly
31st Mar 2021 8:58pm
Love the two stanza structure ... all vanilla ... till it is time for 32 flavors again ... nice write ... compliments the poem perfectly ... no surprise this one resonates with me ...
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Re. Jagged Thoughts from the Underbelly
31st Mar 2021 9:03pm
It's always a thrill when you dial into the yin yang of daily life
Vanilla is good for a milkshake but it gets boring fast and then all hell breaks loose ...
You get me L
THX
Vanilla is good for a milkshake but it gets boring fast and then all hell breaks loose ...
You get me L
THX
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Re. Jagged Thoughts from the Underbelly
1st Apr 2021 2:14pm
Ah the romantic and tender first stanza followed by the rough and delightfully painful BDSM stanza. Variety is the spice of life. I am ready for the whip, I have some stuff I want to forget at least for a moment so madness is fine with me. The image is great...
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1st Apr 2021 2:27pm
You know my style and mode of operations
Sweet one minute
Moody fuck the next
It works for people like us
A good whipping saves the day
Broken skin heals ....
Sweet one minute
Moody fuck the next
It works for people like us
A good whipping saves the day
Broken skin heals ....
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1st Apr 2021 2:40pm
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Re. Jagged Thoughts from the Underbelly
12th Apr 2021 7:46pm
"Pain being the happy pill", I like how that's worded and how it can be interpreted for those in the genre of such a lifestyle. It's a tantalizing piece, well accompanied by your digital image sir.
Excellent work.
Excellent work.
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12th Apr 2021 7:52pm
Yeah Wally, his one had some good lines
Words to live by
Glad you like the words and image
Appreciate the nod ...
Words to live by
Glad you like the words and image
Appreciate the nod ...