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darkness.
A whirlpool'd a b y s s
O' how it envies the light
and encompasses
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 30th Mar 2021
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Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 10:40pm
Re: Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:28pm
Re: Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:05pm
Agreed, dearest FeNyX
I very much appreciate the list add and your comment, I know you know.
Many many returned blessings and much love,
🌹
-xo
I very much appreciate the list add and your comment, I know you know.
Many many returned blessings and much love,
🌹
-xo
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
30th Mar 2021 11:02pm
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Re: Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:33pm
That is probably one of the best compliments I have received, Ru— to feel comforted by my words...is everything, methinks. Maybe we each hold a wee bit of candlelight for the other....
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
💙+🖤=🕯️
Much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊 ✨
💙+🖤=🕯️
Anonymous
- Edited 28th May 2021 4:45am
30th Mar 2021 11:44pm
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Re: Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:50pm
Anonymous
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31st Mar 2021 00:11am
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30th Mar 2021 11:12pm
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Re: Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:36pm
You're very very kind, Osem
I am so grateful for your generous list add and those thoughtful succinct comments.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
I am so grateful for your generous list add and those thoughtful succinct comments.
Always a pleasure ✨
🌹
xo
Re. darkness.
30th Mar 2021 11:15pm
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30th Mar 2021 11:35pm
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30th Mar 2021 11:49pm
Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 1:11am
A mind teaser of profound proportions. You make language into your own realm.
Xo
John
Xo
John
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Re: Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 1:31am
Ooooo... That's a truly charming notion, methinks. I appreciate it so much, my friend. ✨ 🌟 ✨
Thank youuuuuuu ☺
🌹
xo
Thank youuuuuuu ☺
🌹
xo
Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 3:10am
Dear BV,
Yes, dark does summon light but I look best in the dark so I’m not coming out.
There was a pull for me in this write and I’m sorry to say the dark is a comfortable place for me. I like knowing the light is there if ever I suck it up to go toward it but darkness is a safety zone. Lovely as per. H🌷
Yes, dark does summon light but I look best in the dark so I’m not coming out.
There was a pull for me in this write and I’m sorry to say the dark is a comfortable place for me. I like knowing the light is there if ever I suck it up to go toward it but darkness is a safety zone. Lovely as per. H🌷
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Re: Re. darkness.
I agree, my friend.
The darkness is where I'm comfy, too 🖤
I often have to adjust my mindset to allow for the light to nourish, like I know it needs to. Yet, I'll still be there with my big black floppy hat on.. 😂
Thank you for the giggle and the understanding of where I was taking this little senryú!
I appreciate your generous list add and taking the time to leave me your absolutely awesome comments.... I look forward to them, always!
Much love,
🌹
xo
The darkness is where I'm comfy, too 🖤
I often have to adjust my mindset to allow for the light to nourish, like I know it needs to. Yet, I'll still be there with my big black floppy hat on.. 😂
Thank you for the giggle and the understanding of where I was taking this little senryú!
I appreciate your generous list add and taking the time to leave me your absolutely awesome comments.... I look forward to them, always!
Much love,
🌹
xo
Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 3:24am
Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 1:27pm
Crisp ... powerful ... starts with the specific ... then expands explosively with the last line ... excellent write ...
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Re: Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 1:49pm
Ty, LilD... I really appreciate your insightful comments, the generous list add and I'm so glad to see you :) I Hope you and Jade are having a good morning, my friend ☀
🌹
xo
-B
🌹
xo
-B
Re: Re. darkness.
31st Mar 2021 3:11pm
Re. darkness.
12th Apr 2021 6:38pm
I like the contrast between those two opposites, in the way you spell abyss so as to give us a feeling of separation and yet we long to be in the light. The image also adds to the overall emotion.
Outstanding work.
Outstanding work.
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