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Touched By You
Touched by you
in so many ways
Both inside and out
I feel a sort
Of ecstasy
Fears plus tears
We have
Paid the steep price
for our passion
Let us rest
In the calm
Of the dawn
in so many ways
Both inside and out
I feel a sort
Of ecstasy
Fears plus tears
We have
Paid the steep price
for our passion
Let us rest
In the calm
Of the dawn
Published 29th Mar 2021
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29th Mar 2021 2:37pm
29th Mar 2021 2:43pm
"Fears plus tears" ... pure potent poetic gold ... nice crisp write Faith ... my kind of poetry ...
29th Mar 2021 3:33pm
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30th Mar 2021 4:04am
Dear FM,
Love the flow, like a ballet, graceful movements and beautiful artistic style. The poem itself reminded me of a brief relationship years ago. Letting it go was a bit more difficult. Your closing lines “ Let us rest
In the calm
Of the dawn” sum it up perfectly. If only I’d known them then.
Heartfelt write. H🌷
Love the flow, like a ballet, graceful movements and beautiful artistic style. The poem itself reminded me of a brief relationship years ago. Letting it go was a bit more difficult. Your closing lines “ Let us rest
In the calm
Of the dawn” sum it up perfectly. If only I’d known them then.
Heartfelt write. H🌷
14th May 2021 9:47am
Aww, such sweet feedback!You always knew how to make my heart smile! So wonderful to hear from you!
31st Mar 2021 1:09am
your poem touched me, it reminded me of my wife and i coming together after one of our many disagreements ,and making up and
finding each other in the morning light
finding each other in the morning light
13th May 2021 3:54pm
14th May 2021 9:43am
Thank you for your wonderful feedback! Today is my birthday and it was nice hearing from you.
14th May 2021 4:39pm
21st Jun 2021 4:27pm
Sorry I am so late seeing your wonderful birthday message. I'm touched by it
Hope all is well with you!
Hope all is well with you!
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21st Jun 2021 5:32pm
Thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my poem. I appreciate it very much.
23rd Jun 2021 4:33am
26th Dec 2021 11:33am
God, this is beautiful. I'll remember the line, "paid the steep price for our passion." That's such a meaningful set of words. Please keep sharing.
27th Dec 2021 7:41am
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks. I haven't been on here very much lately so I am only now seeing your comments. I really appreciate them.
