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Untraceable
My heart was carried along
By a cold, swift current
Merciless at it's worst
I carved it into the gritty sand
Not far from the shore
Where one good wave
Could cover it
And easily turn it into something
Quite forgettable
Not to mention untraceable
By a cold, swift current
Merciless at it's worst
I carved it into the gritty sand
Not far from the shore
Where one good wave
Could cover it
And easily turn it into something
Quite forgettable
Not to mention untraceable
Published 21st Jun 2021
Author's Note
It's good to be writing again.
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21st Jun 2021 6:57pm
21st Jun 2021 7:31pm
Anonymous
21st Jun 2021 11:31pm
remarkably crafted
Thank you for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate it! Thank you also for your reading list entry. It's an honor!
Anonymous
22nd Jun 2021 4:00am
you are most welcome
22nd Jun 2021 6:14am
Welcome back.
When the wave crashes, you either rebuild your castle or you move on. Like how you incorporated the ocean and sand.
When the wave crashes, you either rebuild your castle or you move on. Like how you incorporated the ocean and sand.
22nd Jun 2021 12:07pm
Thank you for the welcoming back. That was nice of you. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
23rd Jun 2021 6:08am
Dear F,
Whoosh! Windswept and out to sea. How wonderfully you’ve defined heartbreak. How lost and unaccounted for you can feel when someone trounces your sincerest most raw emotions. To the point and so poignant. H🌷
Whoosh! Windswept and out to sea. How wonderfully you’ve defined heartbreak. How lost and unaccounted for you can feel when someone trounces your sincerest most raw emotions. To the point and so poignant. H🌷
24th Aug 2021 9:44pm
I'm always honored by your wonderful feedback on my work. I honestly thank you for it. It always makes my heart smile.
10th Jul 2021 9:02am
24th Aug 2021 9:49pm
I almost got back before I slipped away again. Thank you so much for always leaving comments that make my heart smile. They mean so much to me and you do too.
