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The darkness captivates me (+Reading)
"I'd sacrifice myself to you -
Right here tonight,
Because you know that I love you."
(London After Midnight Sacrifice)
The darkness captivates me
I kneel down
Around mute beauty
And, like velvet, shadows
I can feel the look on my skin
It trembles in my body
Spreading through the veins, poison
Inevitably seeks targets
I will sacrifice myself,
I will give my soul to your power
I will sacrifice myself,
yielding to the call of wild passion
I'm on my knees before you
The look is blurred, motionless
We have the last battle ahead
In it, everyone can be humiliated
The eyes are bottomless, cold
And on your lips there is a smile.
Without falling asleep, you see dreams
Reality feeling shaky
I will sacrifice myself
In your made-up universe
I will sacrifice myself to
Love insane and imperishable
Right here tonight,
Because you know that I love you."
(London After Midnight Sacrifice)
The darkness captivates me
I kneel down
Around mute beauty
And, like velvet, shadows
I can feel the look on my skin
It trembles in my body
Spreading through the veins, poison
Inevitably seeks targets
I will sacrifice myself,
I will give my soul to your power
I will sacrifice myself,
yielding to the call of wild passion
I'm on my knees before you
The look is blurred, motionless
We have the last battle ahead
In it, everyone can be humiliated
The eyes are bottomless, cold
And on your lips there is a smile.
Without falling asleep, you see dreams
Reality feeling shaky
I will sacrifice myself
In your made-up universe
I will sacrifice myself to
Love insane and imperishable
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23rd Mar 2021 7:53pm
I like the write and the read ... quite good, Dear Kristina ... Bless and love ... .
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23rd Mar 2021 8:09pm
I am really happy you liked it FeN. Thank you for sharing your thoughts; you made me feel like maybe it's okay then. :) 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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23rd Mar 2021 8:17pm
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23rd Mar 2021 7:59pm
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23rd Mar 2021 8:11pm
I am really happy you felt I was able to capture submissive bliss in this one. I really hope that you are able to return to it soon LDF. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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23rd Mar 2021 8:04pm
Awesome write, great read absolutely lived it go girl.
Really enjoyed that
Love and light.
Ron xx
Really enjoyed that
Love and light.
Ron xx
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23rd Mar 2021 8:15pm
I love the enthusiastic endorsement Ron. I am so happy you enjoyed it and appreciate your feedback on the read so much. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸 Love and maybe 'dark' in this case back at you. :)
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23rd Mar 2021 10:22pm
Evocative and a calling
Loved the reading
Like many feeling your journey
BIG LIKE
Loved the reading
Like many feeling your journey
BIG LIKE
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24th Mar 2021 11:41am
Oh yes! a calling indeed. Thank you so much for the compliment on the reading; I really appreciate that so much. My journey has been a crazy one. BIG LIKE the BIG LIKE. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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23rd Mar 2021 11:51pm
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24th Mar 2021 11:42am
Always looking to sacrifice to love insane and have orgasmic bliss. Thank you for the continued encouragement. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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Upon listening to your words, through his emotionless, dark, cold soul; the vampire smiles and bares his fangs!
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24th Mar 2021 11:46am
Perfect. I love that you connected the vampire angle. Are you a vampire DaVinci? You would have to be to still be around. Actually vampire would be a good theme because it definitely fits perfectly. ;)🌘⛓️🕯️🩸 I really love the comment. :)
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24th Mar 2021 3:02am
Dear K,
Without falling asleep, you see dreams what a great line! I am completely smitten with your formatting creativity. Your bolded lines are a poem within a poem. Never mind the recording. That was terrific. I though the audio was great. I liked the under, over and through current of electric passion. Very suggestive yet tastefully written. Well done as always! H🌷
Without falling asleep, you see dreams what a great line! I am completely smitten with your formatting creativity. Your bolded lines are a poem within a poem. Never mind the recording. That was terrific. I though the audio was great. I liked the under, over and through current of electric passion. Very suggestive yet tastefully written. Well done as always! H🌷
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24th Mar 2021 12:10pm
You always pick some of my favorite lines. I love you for commenting on the formatting; I am still super impatient with it but I actually think this one came out okay. :) And I love that you see the poem within a poem. Thank you so much for the compliment on the recording, you always make me feel better about these. xo 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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24th Mar 2021 9:30pm
Your unique A+ poem, professional and enchanting voice, cadance and more invades the senses and creates an amazing UP, not wanting to come down....WOW...Hugs, kisses, and peace, oral
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24th Mar 2021 9:46pm
Deer in the headlights. Such an absolutely wonderful comment. Really I don't know what to say... I don't even have anything sarcastic and funny to say; that's your fault. :) I love creating an amazing UP. And enchanting and invades the senses is just WOW to me. Thank you so much! Hug and kisses. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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24th Mar 2021 9:48pm
Amazing, even your comments are UP fire starters. Hugs, kisses, and peace. oral
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24th Mar 2021 11:08pm
Brava,Kristina❣❣ Romantic piece beautifully enhanced by your reading. Iike the subtle music as well. This passage is wonderful...it's kinda that tingle you feel when you know someone's staring at you,
"I can feel the look on my skin"
"I can feel the look on my skin"
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25th Mar 2021 00:32am
I am really happy you liked it GW. And I love that you think the reading enhanced it. Yes, that's exactly what it is. ;) Thank you so much for the comment and feedback. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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26th Mar 2021 11:37am
I have been told I could wake the dead. So waking the goff should be easy. ;)
(Nice!)
I typically have some layering and different meanings built in. I am glad you like the dark/gothic imagery. I do love piano, and also violin. It's not all that easy to quickly find copyright free music so I was fortunate to find that one. Thank you so much for the wonderful and detailed comment. I love it. And I miss the UK. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
I have lots of dark layers in my mind. 🕷️🕸️
(p.s you too)
(Nice!)
I typically have some layering and different meanings built in. I am glad you like the dark/gothic imagery. I do love piano, and also violin. It's not all that easy to quickly find copyright free music so I was fortunate to find that one. Thank you so much for the wonderful and detailed comment. I love it. And I miss the UK. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
I have lots of dark layers in my mind. 🕷️🕸️
(p.s you too)
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26th Mar 2021 9:10pm
We don't know it we are remembering this or it's something totally ours. But love or to give yourself up to love is the ultimate. The ultimate sacrifice, the ultimate bondage, the ultimate light, darkness, pain, and pleasure. The point of turning yourself over to total lover is indeed the ultimate BDSM, tight piece X
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26th Mar 2021 10:56pm
I love how you expressed this I_IS_ME, it is truly the ultimate to have that level of trust and intimacy. To make the most beautiful sacrifice and obtain all those feelings you so beautifully expressed. It is an amazing feeling to feel so deeply whether it be pleasure, pain, darkness, light, surrender, bondage, etc. I am really happy you could feel the true depth and meaning in this. Thank you so much for the tight comment. :) 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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27th Mar 2021 10:51pm
I love this Kris. Giving over this love this trust to someone that you feel comfortable enough that you can just be.
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28th Mar 2021 00:09am
It is definitely so beautiful when you have that love and trust where you can just give in completely; let all the other stuff fall away and just immerse yourself in that perfect intimacy. It takes someone special to truly reach that level of trust. I am really happy you loved this one Lj. :) 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2021 9:27pm
This was so impressive. I read it first and then listened, wow your audio just submerged me deeper. It was beautiful. I cant fault perfection. This is wonderful
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29th Mar 2021 10:33pm
Thank you so much for the absolutely wonderful comment Gwen. I think reading it and then listening is a good approach. I am so happy you thought it was beautiful. Always nervous with these readings. And completely speechless on the perfection remark. Thanks again. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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Anonymous
29th Mar 2021 11:02pm
So deserving to be called perfection. You inspired me with your audio :)
Gwen
Gwen
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30th Mar 2021 5:27pm
I really liked the depth of this dark and submissive spill. It not only shows the emotional connection but is also full of aching passion.
Bravo.
Bravo.
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30th Mar 2021 5:31pm
I knew you would see the depth Wally. Emotional connection and aching passion is a great description. That connection which goes beyond a normal relationship and into realms that make life more exciting and worth living. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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19th Jul 2022 1:48pm
I love to leave the imagination swirling especially with a delicious submissive write. ;) That's one of my happy places. ;) (well intense and passionate, but that makes me happy :p) The depths of that passion has no limits so I am really happy you could feel it and I appreciate for thoughts on listening so much, Always have second thoughts about posting these spoken ones. 🌘⛓️🕯️🩸
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