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Night scenery
So quiet and fresh
On nights in March
And only a little
breaks the silence
The sound of the wind
swaying fresh foliage,
Yes, the trills of
a young nightingale flock
Accompanying the cuckoo
in the morning ...
Clouds rush by,
As if light paper
canvases ...
The moon is playful,
a lantern looms
through the windows ,
drawing a picture
of the shadows ...
Down me so smoothly
and contrast
Bizarre heaven scenery
captivated by the
magnificence of
miracles in the eyes
and the magic of nature
is not subject to people...
On nights in March
And only a little
breaks the silence
The sound of the wind
swaying fresh foliage,
Yes, the trills of
a young nightingale flock
Accompanying the cuckoo
in the morning ...
Clouds rush by,
As if light paper
canvases ...
The moon is playful,
a lantern looms
through the windows ,
drawing a picture
of the shadows ...
Down me so smoothly
and contrast
Bizarre heaven scenery
captivated by the
magnificence of
miracles in the eyes
and the magic of nature
is not subject to people...
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Re: Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:11pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment, Adagio! :) I really appreciate it. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:19pm
Re: Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:27pm
Thank you so much for the compliment Ron! I hope you are having a wonderful Sunday. :) 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:29pm
You move people Kristina
I’m one of them ..
This piece has capacity and raw fortitude and it’s another example how on a daily basis you bring it home on this site
Last line is miraculous once again ..,
Beautiful transcending poetry
Blown away
BIG LIKE
I’m one of them ..
This piece has capacity and raw fortitude and it’s another example how on a daily basis you bring it home on this site
Last line is miraculous once again ..,
Beautiful transcending poetry
Blown away
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:34pm
Deer in the headlights for sure. I really don't know what to say. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment PS! I am so happy you liked this one too. Your comment blew me away. BIG LIKE. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
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Re: Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:51pm
Thank you so much for reading and commenting BP. I am so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for the beautiful compliment. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:43pm
Re: Re. Night scenery
14th Mar 2021 8:52pm
Nature is magical indeed and I also love the hooting of owls! Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Francisco. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 3:02am
Dear K,
Beautiful piece of sweet relief. You write of a scene that brings a rested soul and peaceful heart. For me at any rate. I love watching clouds breeze past the moon and hearing the birds evening chatter. Almost as though any frustration of the daytime can be offered up and blown away in the twilight. Thoroughly lovely poem. A tonic for the mind. H🌷
Beautiful piece of sweet relief. You write of a scene that brings a rested soul and peaceful heart. For me at any rate. I love watching clouds breeze past the moon and hearing the birds evening chatter. Almost as though any frustration of the daytime can be offered up and blown away in the twilight. Thoroughly lovely poem. A tonic for the mind. H🌷
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Re: Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 10:53am
I am really happy you found it a serene and peaceful scene. I love the night and the feelings and sounds it brings also. Thank you so much for the comment and sharing your thoughts. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
KX, your descriptive writing of the night is rooted brilliantly by nature.
It is both tranquil yet unbridled with its force.
.... ahhhhh just the thoughts of whispering winds by the force of nature
along with singing birds' songs reverberating as the dark of night succumbs to the light of day
........The splendor of this write leaves your readers to slumber with a sigh of contentment under the spell of nature's force
In fact, just reading your splendid poem of nature I got all excited about the coming of Spring that I wet my PLANTS!
Beautiful!!!
It is both tranquil yet unbridled with its force.
.... ahhhhh just the thoughts of whispering winds by the force of nature
along with singing birds' songs reverberating as the dark of night succumbs to the light of day
........The splendor of this write leaves your readers to slumber with a sigh of contentment under the spell of nature's force
In fact, just reading your splendid poem of nature I got all excited about the coming of Spring that I wet my PLANTS!
Beautiful!!!
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Re: Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 4:43pm
My dear Feet, it is so nice to see that you survived your time away (doing whatever things you were doing :p) and are back sharing your wonderful comments with us. I am very happy you liked this one and appreciate the whispering winds and singing birds. Nature is truly beautiful. Watching as everything wakes up around us blooming into Spring. "I wet my PLANTS!" I hope you used water. lol 🐦🌃🌙🌲 Thank you so much for the lovely comment, FF. :)
Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 4:25pm
Dear, magical Goddess
This serene piece instills in me such peace and joy.
With this passage you describe some of my most satisfying natural sensations,
"The sound of the wind
swaying fresh foliage,
Yes, the trills of
a young nightingale flock
Accompanying the cuckoo"
I love how you describe the lording presence of the Moon inn this passage,
"a lantern looms
through the windows ,
drawing a picture
of the shadows ..."
Bravissima, mon belle amie et poet 🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻
This serene piece instills in me such peace and joy.
With this passage you describe some of my most satisfying natural sensations,
"The sound of the wind
swaying fresh foliage,
Yes, the trills of
a young nightingale flock
Accompanying the cuckoo"
I love how you describe the lording presence of the Moon inn this passage,
"a lantern looms
through the windows ,
drawing a picture
of the shadows ..."
Bravissima, mon belle amie et poet 🌹🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Re: Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 4:50pm
Ooooo magical Goddess... :) I am so happy to bring you a bit of peace and joy. The wind, birds, and the moon - what could be more beautiful besides being with a loved one among them. You picked two of my favorite passages of course. Thank you so much for the lovely comment GW. Mon ami romantique et počte 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 8:53pm
This is a wonderful write Kristina. Love your descriptions, the mood you set painting a fantastic picture.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re: Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 9:11pm
Thank you so much for the comment and compliment Wally. I am really happy you liked the imagery and mood. :) 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 9:36pm
Re: Re. Night scenery
15th Mar 2021 9:39pm
Hey FeNyX, I am really happy you think it is beautiful. I hope it brightened your day a little. 🐦🌃🌙🌲 Bless and love back at ya. ;)
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15th Mar 2021 9:42pm
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19th Mar 2021 5:21pm
Re. Night scenery
19th Mar 2021 6:25pm
I love the word milieu. ;) and I love that this painted a picture and you could feel the spirit. Thank you so much for the comment and feedback, as always. 🐦🌃🌙🌲
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23rd Aug 2022 11:47am
Re: Re. Night scenery
23rd Aug 2022 12:21pm
Leaving gemstones for you to find everywhere. So you can lost with me in the middle of literally literary nowhere! ;) I had totally forgotten this one, as you say it was lost in the night scenery... And now that scenery includes you. Thanks so much for wandering around my little piece of nowhere... ;) 🐦🌃🌙🌲
Re. Night scenery
24th Aug 2022 6:17am
its always a pleasure following your gems
like a breadcrumb trail that lead straight to you
-and now you are everywhere like the nightsky
like a breadcrumb trail that lead straight to you
-and now you are everywhere like the nightsky
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Re: Re. Night scenery
24th Aug 2022 1:15pm
I love leaving them for you to find. ;) Yes, that trail leads to me in so many ways. There is no map and the compass only spins so you might get lost. But sometimes lost is where we want to be. 'now you are everywhere like the nightsky' that's really beautiful. 🐦🌃🌙🌲