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Tanka - Amorous Flow
Eyes strumming heart-strings
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 12th Mar 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by Remy_L's "Take time to Tanka" competition, among other delightsome imaginings.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
12th Mar 2021 9:30pm
You're a master of short punchy, sensual delicious nuggets of erotic romanticism!! 🙇♀️
I feel a teenie double entendre here as well... heh heh heh... Or that might just be me and my lovely naughty girl side that reads into it what my mind does... lol 😁... 😈 😇
Ty for sharing, BB 🐻 💋 🐻 🌋
I thoroughly enjoyed reading
🌹
xo
I feel a teenie double entendre here as well... heh heh heh... Or that might just be me and my lovely naughty girl side that reads into it what my mind does... lol 😁... 😈 😇
Ty for sharing, BB 🐻 💋 🐻 🌋
I thoroughly enjoyed reading
🌹
xo
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
12th Mar 2021 9:47pm
Thank you. Lady Blue🌹 i'm loving this Tanka style. And you have done splendid detective work 😘 I am way over the moon thst you enjoyed this piece.in the approximate words of Elvis, Tanka very much 😁
Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
tanka very much, he says... (giggling)... 🤭.. Awesome!
I usually go to with
Thankyaverymuch.....
I'm a huge Elvis fan, btw
😂 😂 😂 😂
👍🏻
I usually go to with
Thankyaverymuch.....
I'm a huge Elvis fan, btw
😂 😂 😂 😂
👍🏻
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 10:56pm
Your's is better. I'm an Elvis fan as well. Did you see my Elvis piece.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/381549-millennial-king/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/381549-millennial-king/
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 3:05am
Ooh, this is very clever... love those last 2 lines! Wink wink, nudge nudge...
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 11:23pm
Yes, I'll admit that I had some good fun writing the last lines...left out "clean" on purpose...nudge nudge wink wink backatcha 😁 I am super pleased you enjoyed this piece 🌹
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
This is perfect. Absolutely love those last 2 lines.
Good luck on the competition.
Good luck on the competition.
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 11:25pm
I am glad you like this one. Thank you so much for the add and your comment. The las two lines were naughty fun 🌹
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 9:38pm
Yes, all of us girls love those last 2 lines; if you have not figured that out yet. lol The whole thing is perfect though. Best of luck in the competition... :)
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Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
29th Mar 2021 3:44am
Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
30th Mar 2021 7:54am
Wow❣ Remy thank you so much. I am super stoked that you enjoyed this piece🌹