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Tanka - Amorous Flow
Eyes strumming heart-strings
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
beating in double four time
making hot blood race
to erect a monument
dedicated to our love
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 12th Mar 2021
Author's Note
Inspired by Remy_L's "Take time to Tanka" competition, among other delightsome imaginings.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
12th Mar 2021 9:30pm
You're a master of short punchy, sensual delicious nuggets of erotic romanticism!! ๐โโ๏ธ
I feel a teenie double entendre here as well... heh heh heh... Or that might just be me and my lovely naughty girl side that reads into it what my mind does... lol ๐... ๐ ๐
Ty for sharing, BB ๐ป ๐ ๐ป ๐
I thoroughly enjoyed reading
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xo
I feel a teenie double entendre here as well... heh heh heh... Or that might just be me and my lovely naughty girl side that reads into it what my mind does... lol ๐... ๐ ๐
Ty for sharing, BB ๐ป ๐ ๐ป ๐
I thoroughly enjoyed reading
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xo
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
12th Mar 2021 9:47pm
Thank you. Lady Blue๐น i'm loving this Tanka style. And you have done splendid detective work ๐ I am way over the moon thst you enjoyed this piece.in the approximate words of Elvis, Tanka very much ๐
Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
tanka very much, he says... (giggling)... ๐คญ.. Awesome!
I usually go to with
Thankyaverymuch.....
I'm a huge Elvis fan, btw
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I usually go to with
Thankyaverymuch.....
I'm a huge Elvis fan, btw
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 10:56pm
Your's is better. I'm an Elvis fan as well. Did you see my Elvis piece.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/381549-millennial-king/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/381549-millennial-king/
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 3:05am
Ooh, this is very clever... love those last 2 lines! Wink wink, nudge nudge...
Bravo!
Bravo!
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 11:23pm
Yes, I'll admit that I had some good fun writing the last lines...left out "clean" on purpose...nudge nudge wink wink backatcha ๐ I am super pleased you enjoyed this piece ๐น
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
This is perfect. Absolutely love those last 2 lines.
Good luck on the competition.
Good luck on the competition.
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Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 11:25pm
I am glad you like this one. Thank you so much for the add and your comment. The las two lines were naughty fun ๐น
Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
13th Mar 2021 9:38pm
Yes, all of us girls love those last 2 lines; if you have not figured that out yet. lol The whole thing is perfect though. Best of luck in the competition... :)
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Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
29th Mar 2021 3:44am
Re: Re. Tanka - Amorous Flow
30th Mar 2021 7:54am
Wowโฃ Remy thank you so much. I am super stoked that you enjoyed this piece๐น