deepundergroundpoetry.com
death
moments like spare
change lost in
the corners
of an old
couch
tears search for
eyes to
fill
as we hasten to that
place where sleep
grows like weeds
never to be
pulled
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 6
reading list entries 3
comments 12
reads 580
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. death
9th Mar 2021 3:02am
My goodness.
The profundity of this BK, has left me speechless.
thank you.
The profundity of this BK, has left me speechless.
thank you.
0
Re: Re. death
9th Mar 2021 3:25am
Re. death
9th Mar 2021 4:50am
Geez ... I want to comment but I think c_f said it perfectly.
Wow, bk
thank you, indeed
many hugs, my friend
🌹
Wow, bk
thank you, indeed
many hugs, my friend
🌹
1
Re: Re. death
9th Mar 2021 10:53am
Re: Re. death
9th Mar 2021 5:10pm
Re. death
9th Mar 2021 4:36pm
Dear BK,
“ as we hasten to that
place where sleep
grows like weeds
never to be
pulled” as somber a stanza as I read this to mean for me, I’m okay with it. I was here, then I wasn’t.
Some days are starker than others. I do appreciate the straight forward force of this write. I love how you don’t mince words. I’m taking notes...
H🌷
“ as we hasten to that
place where sleep
grows like weeds
never to be
pulled” as somber a stanza as I read this to mean for me, I’m okay with it. I was here, then I wasn’t.
Some days are starker than others. I do appreciate the straight forward force of this write. I love how you don’t mince words. I’m taking notes...
H🌷
0
Re: Re. death
9th Mar 2021 5:13pm
For me there is no point in denying/avoiding the inevitable that is waiting at the end of the road.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Honoria.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. death
10th Mar 2021 11:01pm
You capture these subtle moments and thoughts so intriguingly.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
0
Re: Re. death
11th Mar 2021 10:54am
Re: Re. death
14th Mar 2021 5:12pm