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6th Mar 2021 9:22am
Betrayal is the mother of all fuck ups. You deserve better than that. You find the right person for you when the time is right. Keep on writing.
8th Mar 2021 5:53pm
I like that rhyme scheme all through the piece and that last night takes it away, like betrayal. It's an excellent visual to accompany this piece.
Best of luck in the comp E.
Best of luck in the comp E.
16th Mar 2021 3:30am
