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26th Feb 2021 2:38pm
Delightful, Elena! There is magic in a kiss, and you've expressed that perfectly in the last line here. The entire poem leads up to that moment. Best of luck in the comp!
26th Feb 2021 10:00pm
27th Feb 2021 2:07am
2nd Mar 2021 8:10am
4th Mar 2021 2:47am
I liked the description of how a kiss can really slow time, captured forever in our hearts and minds.
Loved the picture in the background to accompany this lovely piece. Well done E.
Good luck in the comp.
Loved the picture in the background to accompany this lovely piece. Well done E.
Good luck in the comp.
16th Mar 2021 3:31am
