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Almost Interludes
Sometimes we have quiet moments
Almost interludes
When all the comic stuff falls away
I see your tenderness
It melts
It's surreal
It's intimate
Almost interludes
When all the comic stuff falls away
I see your tenderness
It melts
It's surreal
It's intimate
Author's Note
Out of the darkness and across a great divide
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Re: Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 9:30pm
Been in a dark period lately so it was time to let some light in ...
Appreciate
Thx
Appreciate
Thx
Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 9:53pm
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4th Mar 2021 9:55pm
Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 11:29pm
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4th Mar 2021 11:33pm
Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 11:29pm
and what trip ....across the sunrise/light.
thank You I enjoyed this, Poet.
thank You I enjoyed this, Poet.
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Re: Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 11:34pm
Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 11:39pm
These enLIGHTening poetic interludes are proof of a profound thinker.
Knowledge of your darkness reveals your kinship to to the light brother.
Excellent spill!!
Knowledge of your darkness reveals your kinship to to the light brother.
Excellent spill!!
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Re: Re. Almost Interludes
4th Mar 2021 11:43pm
That dark phase I'm in needed a little help
Just like the stock market
Gets demolished today
Up again tomorrow
That's how I feel lately
Thx Feet
Appreciate you
Just like the stock market
Gets demolished today
Up again tomorrow
That's how I feel lately
Thx Feet
Appreciate you
Re. Almost Interludes
5th Mar 2021 2:40am
Those interludes are catnip, keep me coming back for more...
Sweetness
xx
Sweetness
xx
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Re. Almost Interludes
8th Mar 2021 00:39am
May be you using interlude in the title made this feel classical and sexy/ romantic.
I liked it
I liked it
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Re: Re. Almost Interludes
8th Mar 2021 00:43am
Re. Almost Interludes
10th Mar 2021 6:34pm
This is really romantic and beautiful. We need those quiet moments when as you say everything else melts away and you can just hold each other. It can definitely be surreal in the midst of all the hectic things in life. I think you captured this so well.
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18th Sep 2024 2:45am
Re. Almost Interludes
10th Mar 2021 7:21pm
This is a beautiful and majestic response to this poem ...
I'm glad you can appreciate this side of my writing as I only let it out every so often.
BIG LIKE
Thank you Kx
I'm glad you can appreciate this side of my writing as I only let it out every so often.
BIG LIKE
Thank you Kx
Re. Almost Interludes
10th Mar 2023 2:50am
Oh my gawd, you do have a heart! And it’s squishy! Gross! Ew! It got on me! Get it off! Get it off!
But hey… this was lovely. Your vulnerability was really special.
Big like.
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Re: Re. Almost Interludes
10th Mar 2023 2:53am