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Mr. Green Eyes

When the fish is biting good
the Moon was shining bright
then
suddenly the night stood still
I could feel cold chills running
through my balls as II was
looking at two huge Green Eyes
flashing at me like a stoplight
I was in a tight spot
I almost went into a coma
but I managed to say HI
Mr. Green Eyes
how are you all tonight
Written by anewpoet (William Fox)
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it was a tough call
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