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Your Love
Loving you
is much like walking barefoot
in a field of thistle
It's thorns have been cruel
and brutal while your beauty softens the soles of my feet
is much like walking barefoot
in a field of thistle
It's thorns have been cruel
and brutal while your beauty softens the soles of my feet
Published 22nd Feb 2021
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Written for Visual Poetry Competition
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Now, this is good. Maybe you could write one about roses in a similar vein. I once heard it said about the British political Labour Party that they look good on the surface but underneath, are a load of pricks, lol. 😉
