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Note to self (69)
Drank my youth away
Never had a real goal
A lost sheep
But always followed the easiest road,
Woke up one day, stunned
That I was at the bottom of the pile.
What? Surely i deserved more,
For I was I. Ego.
So now all I can do is
Try to salvage
And sigh.
Never had a real goal
A lost sheep
But always followed the easiest road,
Woke up one day, stunned
That I was at the bottom of the pile.
What? Surely i deserved more,
For I was I. Ego.
So now all I can do is
Try to salvage
And sigh.
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Re. Note to self (69)
21st Feb 2021 11:50am
Very unique and revealing spill! Better late than never to start again anew. I could feel the emotion in your words. I love this!
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21st Feb 2021 1:27pm
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21st Feb 2021 3:48pm
Re. Note to self (69)
21st Feb 2021 2:34pm
It's amazing how easily the slippery slope overtakes us
Glass half full?
You awoke at the bottom of the pile still willing to strive for and capable of seeing the better life that you feel deserving of
Now if I can just apply your advice to my life...
Glass half full?
You awoke at the bottom of the pile still willing to strive for and capable of seeing the better life that you feel deserving of
Now if I can just apply your advice to my life...
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21st Feb 2021 2:40pm
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Re: Re. Note to self (69)
22nd Feb 2021 00:13am
More like self-discipline...you either control the devil in you....or he takes control and drags you down the pits real wuick.
Re. Note to self (69)
22nd Feb 2021 00:16am
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Re. Note to self (69)
1st Mar 2021 6:31pm
It's like at the blink of an eye and time has passed. How I wish our younger selves would have thought about the future more (at least for many of us).
Reflective write robert, well done.
Reflective write robert, well done.
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1st Mar 2021 7:01pm