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Silence
Like a tree,
I observe the world around me.
Give me hate, and i return my gaze.
Ever watchful, most people I amaze.
I have stood still and struck
the sound of feet, leaving only the omnipresent silence.
I observe the world around me.
Give me hate, and i return my gaze.
Ever watchful, most people I amaze.
I have stood still and struck
the sound of feet, leaving only the omnipresent silence.
Published 10th Feb 2012
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10th Feb 2012 9:37pm
i actually like this one. it has a lot of imagry and things that are awsome. me like
11th Feb 2012 3:55am
My favorite line was, "give me hate, and i return my gaze". Keep writing and read more
10th Apr 2012 8:17pm
So simple yet so elegant. Great stuff. Quite dark, but also quite peaceful.
9th Feb 2014 9:54pm
