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Doorways
A doorway to another doorway
Mirrored a myriad of times
Each doorway, leads to another
Like a Russian Doll sublime
A doorway that eventually
Leads to a place you once knew
Like walking in cycles of circles
Doorways to misconstrue
by Jemia
Mirrored a myriad of times
Each doorway, leads to another
Like a Russian Doll sublime
A doorway that eventually
Leads to a place you once knew
Like walking in cycles of circles
Doorways to misconstrue
by Jemia
Published 19th Feb 2021
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10th Apr 2021 9:50pm
i really enjoyed how you explored the lifecycle through doorway, there was a real surrealism about it with the comparison to russian dolls because as we get down to the last doll it's incredibly small and i linked that to us growing older and softer
very nice exploring throughout this
in such little wording which is quite a skill
thank you for sharing :)
-ethan
very nice exploring throughout this
in such little wording which is quite a skill
thank you for sharing :)
-ethan
