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A moment of time is needed
Just to be back in
Sometimes I pay to pay the price
So that I remember wtf it is,
....that I have been
This is nice
...a split second on pause
...a mandatory," from time to time"
The rat race keeps drowning me
... but then,
.... even that,
can turn to ice.
Sometimes I pay to pay the price
So that I remember wtf it is,
....that I have been
This is nice
...a split second on pause
...a mandatory," from time to time"
The rat race keeps drowning me
... but then,
.... even that,
can turn to ice.
Published 17th Feb 2021
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Humanitarian survival 101 of Humans
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Anonymous
18th Feb 2021 2:34am
This is so nice of a poem. I really liked it. I don't do critiques or have a great felicity with superlatives, but I just wanted to say.
19th Feb 2021 2:41pm
Yes, you gave me something to think about. Thank you. Hugs and peace, oral
Gosh thanks you guys.
I'm new to this.
.... putting my thought into words?!.
......really gets scary for me at my age etc. etc. To often I drown out the sounds of my own voice, with that of the worlds different view.
Their, "what I could've been/should have done" and, "more interesting than me attacks.""
I'm new to this.
.... putting my thought into words?!.
......really gets scary for me at my age etc. etc. To often I drown out the sounds of my own voice, with that of the worlds different view.
Their, "what I could've been/should have done" and, "more interesting than me attacks.""
