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Captivity
Thin stockings on the leg
Draw your gaze over the knees
And above, to lace lingerie
You surrendered!
And were captured by me ...
Draw your gaze over the knees
And above, to lace lingerie
You surrendered!
And were captured by me ...
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Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 8:35pm
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16th Feb 2021 8:50pm
Right? you know what I am talking about Ron... lol I am just trying to keep you in my captivity. ;) Thank you for the love as always! And back at ya. I am pissed there is no jail emoji... ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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16th Feb 2021 9:26pm
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16th Feb 2021 9:49pm
Hugs. Wishing you nothing but the best Ron. You bring so much light to DUP. X
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16th Feb 2021 8:37pm
Like a cartoon character, I got caught in the snare box trap for peeking under the "box".
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16th Feb 2021 8:53pm
The most perfectly 'laid' trap to snare you. Be careful where you go peeking and NEVER trust anyone who does not like cartoons. Actually don't be careful you are definitely going to fall into captivity every time. lol ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 9:19pm
Great sensual erotica ... sets the stage ... lets my libido ... wander ...
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Re: Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 9:39pm
Thank you so much LDF! I love that you liked these last two. I struggled with if I should put this in Erotic or Love, I see it both ways! Maybe I made the wrong choice. lol Lets my libido wander.... PERFECT! My work is done, for a moment. ;) ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 9:40pm
Oh, the magic of being captured; especially by this great poem. Hugs and peace, oral
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Captivity can be so beautiful sometimes; indeed magical... 'by this great poem' Oh I love that! you have such a way with words... extra Hugs! Kx ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 10:05pm
Mesmerised by the look in your eyes as I searched for the miraculous and found it ...
Happy to be captured
Perfect words and picture
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Happy to be captured
Perfect words and picture
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Re: Re. Captivity
16th Feb 2021 10:11pm
If I can capture Poetspeak then I get all the street cred!!! lol That's definitely the captivity look in my eyes beckoning to you where to find something miraculous. Thank you for entering my captivity it's the most FUN for sure. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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17th Feb 2021 1:21am
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17th Feb 2021 4:50pm
Definitely!!! I love the hell yes, you really made me smile with that. Thanks for the great comment. :) ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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18th Feb 2021 4:25am
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Re: Re. Captivity
18th Feb 2021 00:01am
Hey Ethan, I love this comment so much. lol Yeah, I already reached in your pockets and took ... never mind. lol
I was starting to worry it did not pack as much punch as I had hoped so I am really happy you got punched. No, that doesn't sound right either.
I promise its always warm, wet, and fun in there. I am going to shut up now. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
And oh, how I miss the UK. :)
I was starting to worry it did not pack as much punch as I had hoped so I am really happy you got punched. No, that doesn't sound right either.
I promise its always warm, wet, and fun in there. I am going to shut up now. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
And oh, how I miss the UK. :)
Re. Captivity
Very few if any can deny that stealthy look at the perfect set of leg encased in some sexy silken stocking. But this only serves as a lure for the perfect Black Widow, at just the right time there is a Basic Instinct, Sharon Stone moment. The trap has been sprung and the prey has been ensnared still kicking and screaming while enduring endless hours of pleasure. Hahaha, sometimes being captured isn't the worst that can happen, extra tight in it's shortness X
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18th Feb 2021 1:11pm
Oh yes! the longer you deny the harder it gets, literally. LOL! That red hourglass on the black widow will count down the minutes or hours till you have sprung her trap but it will happen. "ensnared still kicking and screaming while enduring endless hours of pleasure" lol and now that she has you all wrapped, she can suck off you anytime she wants. But you will be happy to come 'back' over and over again until she is done with you and bites your head off and kills you. Sometimes you don't need words, the thin silken stockings say everything that needs to be said. Loving the extra tight, everyone does... ;) Great comment I_IS_ME, I can see you have been snared quite a few times. lol ⛓️🕷️🕸️🕸️
Re. Captivity
18th Feb 2021 5:09am
Dear K,
I think the young ‘uns might say this is a smokin’ hot write. As a not so young ‘un anymore I’m just going to say “I wish!”
There is direct subtlety in the word play that I am so fascinated with, “Draw your gaze over the knees” it’s the femme fatale character I always imagine myself to be with “imagine” being the operative word. Oh well, a girl can dream.
I like the one-two punch of this write; imagery, brevity, bravery.
The bolded words are themselves a great poem- “Thin stockings, Draw lace lingerie, You captured by me ...“
Hot score. H🌷
I think the young ‘uns might say this is a smokin’ hot write. As a not so young ‘un anymore I’m just going to say “I wish!”
There is direct subtlety in the word play that I am so fascinated with, “Draw your gaze over the knees” it’s the femme fatale character I always imagine myself to be with “imagine” being the operative word. Oh well, a girl can dream.
I like the one-two punch of this write; imagery, brevity, bravery.
The bolded words are themselves a great poem- “Thin stockings, Draw lace lingerie, You captured by me ...“
Hot score. H🌷
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You are smokin'hot to me Honoria and I bet you have snared some prey and still can! Just slip on those stockings... ;) and a sexy Covid mask because you need to stay safe out there.
I am better at being direct and can be subtlety challenged so I am happy it worked here. :p Femme fatale is always a fun role to play. I know you can... But I understand that nagging self doubt. We are always our own worst critics. ugh!
I like your choice of bravery as a description, there is definitely a confidence and bravery in seduction. I also love that I could get a couple punches in. lol that's fun... :p
So happy you saw that in the bolded words, my impatient formatting may be improving. ;) Pretty sure I could weave a Senryu out of that if I toss in a few syllables here and there. Starting to speak like I know a little something about poetry (stress on the little). lol ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
I am better at being direct and can be subtlety challenged so I am happy it worked here. :p Femme fatale is always a fun role to play. I know you can... But I understand that nagging self doubt. We are always our own worst critics. ugh!
I like your choice of bravery as a description, there is definitely a confidence and bravery in seduction. I also love that I could get a couple punches in. lol that's fun... :p
So happy you saw that in the bolded words, my impatient formatting may be improving. ;) Pretty sure I could weave a Senryu out of that if I toss in a few syllables here and there. Starting to speak like I know a little something about poetry (stress on the little). lol ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
18th Feb 2021 6:39am
Dear, Kristina❣️❣️ You illustrate well the seductive powers of a woman. I'm easy prey...no stalking necessary🙃😉🐻💋
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18th Feb 2021 1:09pm
Ah yes! seduction is a super power. ;) no stalking (or stockings) necessary, I know you love women so be careful out there. lol It's okay to be prey just make sure survive to be fed on again and again. ;) Love the upside down Smiley... speaks volumes to me. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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19th Feb 2021 00:02am
Mmmmm..."fed on again and again" now that's a goal I can get behind, or in front, on my head, on my knees...you get the drift.🙃😉
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Re. Captivity
18th Feb 2021 5:24pm
so kind and generous to allow the gaze upon you...and ingenious to exploit it.
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18th Feb 2021 6:29pm
lol I knew if you commented it would be great, Poetrician. How perfectly insightful. Let's call it appreciation rather than exploitation though okay? :p Still ingenious but hasn't this dynamic worked since the beginning of time? Okay, shutting up now. lol Thank you so much for stopping in and the comment. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
18th Feb 2021 7:18pm
There is a ferry art to it and you captured it well here. It’s spellbinding.
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18th Feb 2021 8:46pm
Oh yes! seduction and the ensuing captivity is definitely spellbinding! I suppose it is a type of magic! I hope I can keep seducing you into my comments Wally. ;) ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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1st Mar 2021 9:01am
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1st Mar 2021 1:57pm
I am so happy I was able to capture you with this one and I really appreciate you stopping in to read and share your thoughts. ;) ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
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4th Mar 2021 9:17pm
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4th Mar 2021 9:41pm
This one is definitely good for another look, for the picture. :p
Love the L and BL. Yeah I spelled it out even. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Love the L and BL. Yeah I spelled it out even. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
7th Mar 2021 1:38am
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7th Mar 2021 2:02am
If you are going to surrender then doing so into the flames of passion and lustful hunger is the way to go, right.... The best captivity there is. ;) ⛓️🔒💖⛓️
Re. Captivity
5th Apr 2021 3:42am
Feminine checkmate can be exhilarating for the male. Love to give in to the female in the dance of sensuality.
John
John
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Re: Re. Captivity
5th Apr 2021 2:29pm
And what a lovely dance it is especially when it ends with that beautiful merging of feminine and masculine energy. It is truly one of the most exhilarating and exciting dances of all. King takes Queen, Queen takes King - the game of chess that makes the world fun and worth living in. ⛓️🔒💖⛓️