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The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
spicy sandalwood forests
ignite the atmosphere
in familiar ghost waltzes,
slowly beginning their reverent
undulation
to rhythmic muscle memory ~
steady, heady heartbeats
pulsing
just beneath your skin;
thunder rumbles nearby,
the whole house
shivers;
I join the quivering conclave
on a sigh,
remembering
your voice against my thighs
brewing storms of your own
ignite the atmosphere
in familiar ghost waltzes,
slowly beginning their reverent
undulation
to rhythmic muscle memory ~
steady, heady heartbeats
pulsing
just beneath your skin;
thunder rumbles nearby,
the whole house
shivers;
I join the quivering conclave
on a sigh,
remembering
your voice against my thighs
brewing storms of your own
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Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
16th Feb 2021 6:03am
Evokes all the senses, a scene that can be heard and smelled as well as visualised, a night that promises to be stormy in more than one way. Favourite set of lines, for rhyme:
thunder rumbles nearby,
the whole house
shivering;
I join the quivering conclave
on a sigh,
remembering
thunder rumbles nearby,
the whole house
shivering;
I join the quivering conclave
on a sigh,
remembering
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16th Feb 2021 6:06am
Re: Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
13th Apr 2021 7:04am
Having reread this, favourite lines for eroticism:
your voice against my thighs
brewing storms of your own
your voice against my thighs
brewing storms of your own
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16th Feb 2021 2:19pm
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17th Feb 2021 12:40pm
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16th Feb 2021 8:16pm
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Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
Anonymous
16th Feb 2021 11:56pm
For me it leans away from "erotic" and more towards "romantic". Not that it makes much difference I suppose, but this feels more personal as it evokes memory engagement and conjured up associations in what feels more nostlagic reverie.
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Re: Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
17th Feb 2021 12:56pm
In my mind, erotica and romance often share the bed with limbs intertwined, and all the better if we can get reminiscence to join the fun. Thank you for reading and for the RL, JB.
Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
17th Feb 2021 6:11pm
Your ability to leave me breathless in the way only you can, is a feeling I'll never tire of when reading your distinctive "Only LunaGreyhawk" gorgeous poetic voice. Unparalleled in nuance, subtle but searing in sensuality and all that I feel is genuine perfection of all that is romantic.
My absolute favorite style (type) of reads, hands down. I can't thank you enough for sharing with us.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
My absolute favorite style (type) of reads, hands down. I can't thank you enough for sharing with us.
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo
B
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18th Feb 2021 10:14pm
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18th Feb 2021 10:15pm
Re. The Conclave of Air, Skin, and Memory
18th Feb 2021 4:23pm
Very dreamy, smooth and calming, only to realize how to erotic it was under the layers.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
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18th Feb 2021 10:15pm
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