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Snow Day
the snow is frigid
and the car won't start
I slipped and fell
sorry, not sorry to say
guess I'll have to call off work
you know it's those little miracles
when we're on the couch
drinking hot cocoa in our pajamas
and im just thinking
what's inside your head?
I want it to dig in me
like a blade
can I take a moment
to say I'm so glad
we are here doing nothing at all
gives me time to show
that I haven't forgotten you
sometimes my head gets filled with nonsense
but it's your love I thrive for
how about we go to the bed?
kiss and touch with no plans to get up
what's inside your head?
I want it to dig in me
like a blade
I wake up to your cooking
taste of sweet strawberry from your fingers
I see the news
all the world's at war
ugliness we could carless to know
good thing we're stuck at home
would be nice to frolic in the sun
but that's another time and poem
though for the moment I really don't mind
and the car won't start
I slipped and fell
sorry, not sorry to say
guess I'll have to call off work
you know it's those little miracles
when we're on the couch
drinking hot cocoa in our pajamas
and im just thinking
what's inside your head?
I want it to dig in me
like a blade
can I take a moment
to say I'm so glad
we are here doing nothing at all
gives me time to show
that I haven't forgotten you
sometimes my head gets filled with nonsense
but it's your love I thrive for
how about we go to the bed?
kiss and touch with no plans to get up
what's inside your head?
I want it to dig in me
like a blade
I wake up to your cooking
taste of sweet strawberry from your fingers
I see the news
all the world's at war
ugliness we could carless to know
good thing we're stuck at home
would be nice to frolic in the sun
but that's another time and poem
though for the moment I really don't mind
Published 14th Feb 2021
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18th Feb 2021 1:48am
You have really captured one of life's simple pleasures of staying in with hot cocoa in pajamas with a loved one on a frigid day. It is such a sweet image... even the slipping and falling is cute. lol But gazing into your partner's eyes wondering what's inside their head and then they show you is so sweet. A very endearing write that gave me some beautiful images... I do love the snow so going out into it would be fine with me; making snow melt from the body heat even better. And then make some southern snow cream (if you are not in the south yes it's a thing... (sweetened condensed milk, snow, etc. lol)... Another lovely write.
18th Feb 2021 8:48am
I grew up in the south. I live in Ohio now with people who act like their southern lol. Thank you for the very lovely comment. Made me smile 😃
21st Feb 2021 9:28am
I really like the observational qualities in this. How it explains this beautiful appreciation of the little things. Personally I love snow days. They make the world seem that little bit more magical.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M
