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BEING IN IT
The moment you become
The object for the flow
To move around
Doesn’t have to be bad
The willow dips her branches
In the river and you grab on
Hover at the liminal edge
Hear the sound of being in it
The object for the flow
To move around
Doesn’t have to be bad
The willow dips her branches
In the river and you grab on
Hover at the liminal edge
Hear the sound of being in it
Published 13th Feb 2021
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- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
13th Feb 2021 6:36pm
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It is fun, and a little nerve-wracking when there is random dangerous debris.
13th Feb 2021 7:02pm
I love floating down our clear springs in northern FL.... They're so much cooler than the gulf and you can see straight down to the bottom.... just a blast to float down all day on a tube and then you randomly snorkel to see all the underwater life! It's one of my favorite hot summer day, day trips. I love how this evoked those memories! Ty, Kumar
Well done
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xo
Well done
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xo
13th Feb 2021 7:24pm
13th Feb 2021 8:03pm
Dear K,
I found this poem provided me with a serenity as I read it. Especially the willow, which I’m presuming is a weeping willow, well, that’s what was pictured in my head and I’ve always thought those trees so graceful. This is a wonderful write. H🌷
I found this poem provided me with a serenity as I read it. Especially the willow, which I’m presuming is a weeping willow, well, that’s what was pictured in my head and I’ve always thought those trees so graceful. This is a wonderful write. H🌷
13th Feb 2021 8:24pm
14th Feb 2021 3:18pm
my partner prefers
birch and ash to willow, but
I'll persuade him
(giggles)
birch and ash to willow, but
I'll persuade him
(giggles)
14th Feb 2021 9:35pm
