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romantic notions and all that other bullshit
in love
out of
love
eat love
beat love
cheat
love
love at
first
sight
blinded
by love
make
love
fuck
love
love you
always-
that was
a lie
never
loved
you-
that was
a lie
love of
my
life
love you
to
death
love is life
giving us
the middle
finger
love is the sword
of God driven
deep into our
hearts
love...
a trap we
see
coming from
a
mile away
but
refuse to
escape
out of
love
eat love
beat love
cheat
love
love at
first
sight
blinded
by love
make
love
fuck
love
love you
always-
that was
a lie
never
loved
you-
that was
a lie
love of
my
life
love you
to
death
love is life
giving us
the middle
finger
love is the sword
of God driven
deep into our
hearts
love...
a trap we
see
coming from
a
mile away
but
refuse to
escape
Written by
buddhakitty
Published 7th Feb 2021
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Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
I truly am enthralled with your mind, bk.. I dream of a real world scenario where I could meet you for coffee and talk to you about all different topics at length, just to pick your magnificent brain... I'm not a stalker I promise! I'm just THAT amazed, always... and I guess I'm a little bit odd and have those weird thoughts! (tmi? probably... but honest and true.. lmao).. This piece slaps me across the face with reality, from the title (brilliant!) to your last syllable. We know the quicksand is there, yet we willingly walk straight into it.
-I blame evolution-.. hahaha...Ty for sharing this awesome poetic beauty, it's one of my favorite reads of the year.
Much love and (non stalkery) respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
*Nominated for Feb POtM
-I blame evolution-.. hahaha...Ty for sharing this awesome poetic beauty, it's one of my favorite reads of the year.
Much love and (non stalkery) respect,
🌹
xo
Susan
*Nominated for Feb POtM
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Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 6:37pm
You words are a true blessing to me, Susan. I have a feeling that we would get along perfectly splendid (despite caffeine intoxication from all the expresso we would consume lol) The kind words are greatly appreciated.
Thank you for the nomination.
hug/luv's,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for the nomination.
hug/luv's,
buddhakitty.
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 6:51pm
Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 7:27pm
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 8:25pm
Dear BK,
Mic drop! From every view point you’ve covered the whole love thing. And right now a monastery and good book look like Mecca. Grand slam.
H🌷
Mic drop! From every view point you’ve covered the whole love thing. And right now a monastery and good book look like Mecca. Grand slam.
H🌷
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Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 9:01pm
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 8:45pm
The last stanza reminded me of that 1980s favourite poem: "Autobiography in Five Short Chapters" by Portia Nelson.
https://palousemindfulness.com/docs/autobio_5chapters.pdf
https://palousemindfulness.com/docs/autobio_5chapters.pdf
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Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 9:03pm
I'm not familiar with the poem, Josh. I will have to check it out.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 10:11pm
Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 10:27pm
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 11:20pm
Even when we fight it .. it finds us .. that whole love thing. Excellent spill.
JeJe🌺
JeJe🌺
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Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
7th Feb 2021 11:33pm
You are so right, jamac. It is the ultimate disease. We all seem to be infected by it at one time or another.
Thank you for your insights.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you for your insights.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
15th Feb 2021 8:17pm
My daughter bought a book titled "Fuck Feelings" (I haven't gotten around to reading it), but this felt like it might a chapter in it. Love the humor and realism to it all.
Great verse bk.
Great verse bk.
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Re: Re. romantic notions and all that other bullshit
16th Feb 2021 1:17pm
Thank you, wally. Very much appreciated on this cold and icey morning.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.