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"It Seems" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 24/2/2017

Ya Know ...
It Seems To Be TRUE ... !?!

When It Comes To ...
.... THE TRUTH ....

And How You Use ...
Artistic Grooves ...

Less Is MORE ...
Nowadays For Sure ... !!!

I've Been Told These Words ...
By .... VARIOUS Herds ....

"Listen Big Virge
You're a master of verse !
But for you to be heard,
You should use less words !”

 
Well MY VIEW Is THIS ... !!!

When I'm Being Artistic ...
Why Would I Restrict ... ?!?!?
My Use of ... “ Ink “ ...
If Words Keep Coming ...
Like Riders ... HUNTING ... !!!!

If What I Think ...
Is TOO MUCH For Kids ...
And Adults TOO ... !!!

What Should I Do ... ?

NEUTER My Views ...... ?
And Words I Use .... ?!?

So That My Mind ...
Becomes A Tool I Reduce ....
To Get ... " RECOGNISED " ... ???

I Think ... NOT ... !!!!!!

Because My Mind's NOT A Shop ...
Where You Get ... Knock Offs ... !!!!!

I'm A Writer Who DROPS ...
MORE Pussies Than Cocks ... !!!

That Behave Like ... DOGS ... !!!!

Because My Art ...
Is SMART and Sharp ... !!!!!

So YES IT’s LONG ...
Just Like My Socks ...

Size THIRTEEN Girls ... !!!!!

And When Observed ...
NO MAN On Earth ...
Would Choose To Turn ...

His WHIPPING STICK ...
Into Something That ... “Fits” ...

Inside ... “minute lips” ...

They'd Rather SPLIT ...
And OPEN Them QUICK ...
With Dick That's BIG ... !!!!!

Nice And WIDE .... !!!!!!
So They Can Get INSIDE ...

So Why Would I ...
Write ... minimal rhymes ... !?!

Oh Of Course That's RIGHT ...
To Get ... " RECOGNISED " ... !!!!!!

Well This It SEEMS ...
Is Where Most VEER ...

When It Comes To Their Art ... !!!
And DON’T Even Start ... !!!
On The ... LACK of heart ...

That Now EXISTS ...
In Lyrical Scripts ...
From Todays' Artists ...

And The Songs They Sing ...
That People Call ... HITS ... !!!!!

Well This Piece of Verse ...
Comes From A Comment I Heard ...

That I've heard BEFORE ... !!!
But Here's The Score ... !!!!!

The LESS You Speak ...
On ... Societal Scenes ...
And The WICKEDNESS ...
That's ALWAYS BEEN ...

A PROBLEM For Humanity ... !!!!

Artistically .....
Or In General Speech ...

That's What Makes ...
People ... " HAPPY " ... !!!

And Makes Your Art ...
Get To Those PEAKS ... !!!
Where You Make Money ... !!!!

But THAT DOESN'T Mean ...
It's The Way To Be ... !!!
With Your Artistry ... !!!

If You Create To PLEASE ...
These ... Monetary Peeps' ...
And The DUMMIES Who Run ...
... The INDUSTRY ... !!!!!

What You PUT OUT ...
Will Get Passed Around ...

But Because Like CLOWNS ...
It's Been ... “dumbed down” ... !!!

And That To Me ...
Just Shows How Weak ...
Most Humans BE ... !!!

Now I May Be Wrong ... ???

But From What I've Been Told ...
And What I've ... “ Gleaned “ ...

This In TRUTH Is How ...

..... “ It Seems “ .....
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published
Author's Note
Literally inspired by having the comment quoted in the poem, about, using less words, being said to me .....
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