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Much healthier now
The worst I have ever felt
Has often been my fault
For overdrinking
Overdrugging
Undersleeping
Underloving.
Has often been my fault
For overdrinking
Overdrugging
Undersleeping
Underloving.
Published 20th Jan 2021
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21st Jan 2021 5:58am
Dear P,
To me, it takes a whole lot of gumption to acknowledge shortcomings. It also takes a whole lot of energy to do something about said shortcomings. I thought it was clever that your title gave away your ending and the body of the poem was why you got there. I admire the brevity and right-to-the-point approach in your write.
H🌷
To me, it takes a whole lot of gumption to acknowledge shortcomings. It also takes a whole lot of energy to do something about said shortcomings. I thought it was clever that your title gave away your ending and the body of the poem was why you got there. I admire the brevity and right-to-the-point approach in your write.
H🌷
21st Jan 2021 1:06pm
