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beautiful epiphany
I break a little inside from your beauty
tender epiphanies within me
silences the pain
gentle is your way
wisdom's truth understood
firm and steady you lead
I am your woman
you are my man
denying my need is impossible
inside me, I tremble when you are near
life after life you have found me
with new adventures
new places to uncover deep with my soul
lover my love unlocking all the mysteries that make me...me
a revelation is your kindness
I am willful
you break me so beautifully
Published 12th Jan 2021
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12th Jan 2021 2:21pm
12th Jan 2021 2:28pm
12th Jan 2021 2:38pm
"you break me so beautifully"... What a way to end this gorgeous write... I loved it from beginning, to that brilliant end.
Ty for sharing, this morning.
Much love,
🌹
xo
Ty for sharing, this morning.
Much love,
🌹
xo
12th Jan 2021 2:42pm
good morning beautiful Blue thank you graciously I'm happy you felt this one 🌹
12th Jan 2021 2:39pm
12th Jan 2021 2:42pm
good morning dearest poet it is indeed... thank you for the love on this write... have a great day today 💕
12th Jan 2021 3:15pm
Just the softest tender write, absolutely spell bound
Loved it from start to finish
Brilliant
Love and light
Ron xx
Loved it from start to finish
Brilliant
Love and light
Ron xx
12th Jan 2021 5:04pm
good morning dearest Ron thank you I'm so happy you enjoyed this write...I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
13th Jan 2021 3:33am
Crimsin with each verse you leave me feeling the energy of your passion with this romantic write. I am utterly perplexed by how you continue to write one incredible poem after another........Breathtaking!!!
13th Jan 2021 12:16pm
thank you graciously, dearest poet one of my greatest passions is writing I'm happy it speaks to you, my heart 🌹
13th Jan 2021 4:41am
Dear B,
Extraordinary write. I wondered after I read it how differently my life might have turned out if I’d actually spoke as I felt to the one true love I felt? Thoughtful and thought provoking write. H🌷
Extraordinary write. I wondered after I read it how differently my life might have turned out if I’d actually spoke as I felt to the one true love I felt? Thoughtful and thought provoking write. H🌷
13th Jan 2021 12:18pm
good morning beautiful Honoria you know the first trial is knowing what you truly feel inside and then being honest with yourself about it...then telling the one you love how you feel... it isn't easy...it's much easier to write about it...thank you for the love here 💕
15th Jan 2021 11:49pm
You really have a knack for describing the passion and chemistry. I also believe you have many great pieces to publish a book (as I've stated before). They are a real testament to love and devotion.
Bravo.
Bravo.
