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Raising Cane
Another 50 worder
“I will not tolerate violence” roared our headmaster, thumping his desk.
Billy and me got six strokes of the cane.
“So much for non-violence” I muttered. I got two more.
Billy and I had fought over Molly Molloy; she rejected us both.
'Boys who fight are stupid,' she said.
“I will not tolerate violence” roared our headmaster, thumping his desk.
Billy and me got six strokes of the cane.
“So much for non-violence” I muttered. I got two more.
Billy and I had fought over Molly Molloy; she rejected us both.
'Boys who fight are stupid,' she said.
Published 9th Jan 2021
| Edited 2nd Feb 2021
Author's Note
Every week I try to write a story in exactly 50 words, I don't always win!
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9th Jan 2021 4:32pm
11th Apr 2021 5:25pm
a clever story - and a good reminder spanking can actually hurt the heart and the nether part. I'd love to have the courage to talk back to my dominant that way mid spanking mind you
18th Apr 2021 00:01am
Thanks for your appreciation. Submissive I have never been and oh there trouble that has gotten me into over the years. :-)
