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Eloquence of Desire
It can’t be
It won’t be
Yet
Exquisite vibe
Coats your veneer
It’s very attractive
Worn with tribulation
It doesn’t go unnoticed
It won’t be
Yet
Exquisite vibe
Coats your veneer
It’s very attractive
Worn with tribulation
It doesn’t go unnoticed
Author's Note
Across the great divide .....
Original painting by Poetspeak
Original painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Eloquence of Desire
8th Jan 2021 1:27pm
I find these word and painting soothing and romantic.
Thank you PS, for this feeling early in the morning 😌.
--B
Thank you PS, for this feeling early in the morning 😌.
--B
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Re. Eloquence of Desire
8th Jan 2021 2:27pm
Re. Eloquence of Desire
8th Jan 2021 10:56pm
Better be careful, you might tarnish your image with these beautiful endearing words and paintings. (just a thought). ;)
What I meant to say is this is very warm and loving. The softer side of PoetSpeak.
What I meant to say is this is very warm and loving. The softer side of PoetSpeak.
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Re: Re. Eloquence of Desire
8th Jan 2021 11:08pm
Sometimes you have to look beyond your personal landscape. Be open to other opinions.
My high horse got a little to tall for me to climb.
Talking through interpreters, sending out messages, breaking codes 🔍🈁🔟🆗*️⃣↗️🔛🔜
My high horse got a little to tall for me to climb.
Talking through interpreters, sending out messages, breaking codes 🔍🈁🔟🆗*️⃣↗️🔛🔜
Re: Re. Eloquence of Desire
9th Jan 2021 00:47am
I've got all of your codes dear PoetSpeak. I understand everything perfectly without interpreters. Sometimes the high horse just keeps you from lowering yourself below your potential.
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Re: Re. Eloquence of Desire
9th Jan 2021 00:50am
Trying to stay humble
It won’t last long
Cocky as the day is long
Where’s my damn bottle of pepper vodka ???
It won’t last long
Cocky as the day is long
Where’s my damn bottle of pepper vodka ???
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9th Jan 2021 00:52am
Re. Eloquence of Desire
9th Jan 2021 2:04am
...the conflicting message married to your abstract art makes for a creative submission. You got depth brother!!!
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9th Jan 2021 2:47am
Re. Eloquence of Desire
12th Jan 2021 10:19pm
I found this visibly exquisite and stunning. I love the texture.
Bravo sir.
Bravo sir.
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Re. Eloquence of Desire
13th Jan 2021 2:40am
Re. Eloquence of Desire
It looked abstract until I zoomed in and then I immediately saw a man hitting a yellow punching bag, yikes my mind is a crazy place. Its very bold, so my imagination ran away..
I was inspired by people who are frustrated that gyms are closed. It does have passion.
I was inspired by people who are frustrated that gyms are closed. It does have passion.
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Re: Re. Eloquence of Desire
16th Jan 2021 11:45am
That's the beauty of abstract painting, everyone catches something different.
Trying to break my digital habit, back to the real thing baby ....
Thanks
PR
Trying to break my digital habit, back to the real thing baby ....
Thanks
PR
Re. Eloquence of Desire
19th Jan 2021 3:03pm
I like the almost stoic homage. and i like the emotion of the painting too...the richness of the ingredient of tribulation i think is this poem's nuanced gift. nice job.
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Re. Eloquence of Desire
19th Jan 2021 3:19pm
It's often a challenge to get the balance just right between the words and the painting or between these lovers who might want to be ....
Thanks for the great comment ....
Thanks for the great comment ....