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flawed
you desired the honesty of me
in reality it's painful
hidden deep even from me
it rises to the top as rage
when it devours I can do nothing
it will have its say
burning all in its way
blessed redeemer
you know the truth of me
where will I hide?
I wrestle with your decisions
my own way made
cast not dispersions
I am as created
a flawed creature
inside me I cry
I would that I be beautiful inside and out
so much hurt to be reconciled
I take it day by day
new revelations make my mind spin
new depth of character my thoughts changed
I seek the truth of me
yet I am afraid
Published 30th Dec 2020
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30th Dec 2020 1:12pm
30th Dec 2020 4:13pm
30th Dec 2020 1:35pm
You are beautiful flaws and all princess of darkness
No ones perfect.
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
love and light
Ron x
No ones perfect.
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
love and light
Ron x
30th Dec 2020 4:14pm
smiles thank you dearest Ron the princess of darkness it's true I am that so very dark at times but there is beauty in the dark... I'm grateful for your presence 🌹
30th Dec 2020 1:37pm
It is one of many things that we all struggle with and through yet it is through the passing of time we gain the knowledge that is needed to understand that we are only human beings looking to connect with thyself 🙏
30th Dec 2020 4:16pm
good morning dearest Stoney you are so very thoughtful please forgive me I'm going through a quiet phase hopefully it passes soon...I enjoy your wisdom ❤
31st Dec 2020 00:28am
There is no reason for apologizing for being human with feelings and emotions for there are times in each of our lives basically we need that moment away from the madness and insanity that know one understands to find solitude away from the drama and stress of the situations and the world 🙏😎💪 keep your head up you got this down pact respect dear poetess 😇😁
30th Dec 2020 1:42pm
It's difficult to look inward at the painful things. Sometimes healing will only occur when we confront it, as hard as it is. Beautiful and introspective.
30th Dec 2020 4:17pm
good morning beautiful Eerie it is very difficult to be unflinchingly honest with yourself but it doesn't pay to lie to yourself either... thank you for the love and insight here 💕
Anonymous
30th Dec 2020 3:29pm
so afraid, some ? times... Me Too.
me too. though, i have to think i remember that i have feet sometimes, and then it's like one step in front of the other ? and that gives me comfort
but it's hard to live without that fear. i haven't got there yet
me too. though, i have to think i remember that i have feet sometimes, and then it's like one step in front of the other ? and that gives me comfort
but it's hard to live without that fear. i haven't got there yet
30th Dec 2020 4:19pm
hello beautiful poetess yes I'm afraid a lot of the time... there are so many unknowns I guess we should take comfort in the knowledge it's all in the journey... we aren't alone we have each other... thank you for being here ❤
Anonymous
30th Dec 2020 7:02pm
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30th Dec 2020 3:39pm
A lifelong journey, isn't it? Discovering that our flaws are our strengths, and our hurts are tools for helping...
Yeah, I'm not there yet either.
❤
Yeah, I'm not there yet either.
❤
30th Dec 2020 4:20pm
hello beautiful poetess yes a lifelong journey a learning experience wow I'm grateful for your presence on the way thank you for being here 💕
