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Hate-filled Pride~with Drieks
Barely illegal.
Hardly see-through.
Nowhere to hide when the winds come take you.
Merely a feather towards my weight.
A weight gained for all the hate-filled pride i ate.
Abused beyond words i’m comfortable to use.
None powerful enough to sum up the dysfunctions i fused.
This road to happiness seems never ending.
Which is fine.
This road has turns worth bending.
Hardly see-through.
Nowhere to hide when the winds come take you.
Merely a feather towards my weight.
A weight gained for all the hate-filled pride i ate.
Abused beyond words i’m comfortable to use.
None powerful enough to sum up the dysfunctions i fused.
This road to happiness seems never ending.
Which is fine.
This road has turns worth bending.
Published 29th Dec 2020
Author's Note
A very special thanks to Drieks for the collaboration ❤️
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2nd Jan 2021 4:12pm
13th Jan 2021 5:06am
Terrific fusion of voices here, nice use of metaphor with gravitas in the message.
In kindness,
Daniel
In kindness,
Daniel
21st Sep 2022 3:34am
