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Suffocating
Am I?
Suffocating
There are so much confined in this one spot,one place
screaming to burst out into this world called reality
wanting to project its purpose to the world
wishing and hoping to create a new atmosphere in special time
Trapped
from expression
wanting and needing to come out so bad that you could almost taste it
you can smell it from a mile away
craves the desire for it all
reaching for a exit to let go
so can't you see
I am.............
suffocating
Suffocating
There are so much confined in this one spot,one place
screaming to burst out into this world called reality
wanting to project its purpose to the world
wishing and hoping to create a new atmosphere in special time
Trapped
from expression
wanting and needing to come out so bad that you could almost taste it
you can smell it from a mile away
craves the desire for it all
reaching for a exit to let go
so can't you see
I am.............
suffocating
Published 5th Feb 2012
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26th Mar 2012 8:44pm
Perception is so tricky. Sometimes the traps we think are placed on us by others are really create by what we think our other people's thoughts and expectations.
Very much like the questioning of reality. The Question mark after "Am I" rather then suffocating is interesting!
Very much like the questioning of reality. The Question mark after "Am I" rather then suffocating is interesting!
26th Mar 2012 9:32pm
Well thank u very much for that insight and for reading and commenting thanks
