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Death
director's cut
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director's cut
time is a knife
sharpened
to a fine edge
with dread.
God's surgical
precision,
the wound is
mortal
Written by
buddhakitty
Published
24th Dec 2020
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Re. director's cut
nikkimoe
24th Dec 2020 9:50pm
I love it.
Minimal perfection.
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buddhakitty
25th Dec 2020 1:51am
Thank you, nik. Sometimes the less said, the better.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. director's cut
Grae
(Bryan Gray)
25th Dec 2020 1:07am
Time surely drags
like a razor.
I like this.
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buddhakitty
25th Dec 2020 1:53am
Thank you, Grae. Very much appreciated.
regards,
buddhakitty.
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Honoria
25th Dec 2020 2:44am
Dear BK,
Is it ever! The wound being mortal that is. Stings like an SOB too! This whole getting older thing is very trying, not to mention painful. Love your hit and run style on this. H🌷
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buddhakitty
25th Dec 2020 3:04am
Thank you, Honoria. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Blackwolf
(I.M.Blackwolf)
25th Dec 2020 3:40am
The wound may be mortal , yet the soul is eternal...
Reincarnation is the tripwire to further learning...;)
Nicely written , my friend...
Hope all is well for you
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buddhakitty
25th Dec 2020 4:53pm
Thank you, Blackwolf. Blessed be to you this season.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Ahavati
(Tams)
25th Dec 2020 7:47pm
Time is indeed a double-edged sword, isn't it, Kitts? On one hand it leaves behind Love; and, on the other, it leaves behind painful circumstance.
Happy Christmas, my friend! May it be blessed with much love and happiness. xo
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buddhakitty
25th Dec 2020 11:05pm
Good Christmas and a brave new year to you, Ahvanti.
hugs,
buddhakitty
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