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Senryu - Shimmer
Published 23rd Dec 2020
Author's Note
Eating breakfast this morning enjoying a gentle breeze, sunshine, and a rare Texas low-humidity atmosphere when I noticed the shadow of my water glass. Snapped the pic...wrote the poem.
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23rd Dec 2020 7:16am
Dear GW,
Now there is the optimism so needed to truck through another day. And what a fabulous picture in support of your lovely write. In any measure I always consider experiences like these signs that things will be okay, especially after a whole bunch of things that haven’t been okay. Lovely write H🌷
Now there is the optimism so needed to truck through another day. And what a fabulous picture in support of your lovely write. In any measure I always consider experiences like these signs that things will be okay, especially after a whole bunch of things that haven’t been okay. Lovely write H🌷
23rd Dec 2020 11:03pm
Dear Honoria, your comments are a full glass for me. Your tender, kind insights make me happy. Thank you so much 🙏❣
23rd Dec 2020 11:52am
Just gorgeous, photo and poem! I love such random inspirations.
It sure looks warm there....
It sure looks warm there....
23rd Dec 2020 11:09pm
Dear Titanium, I am so pmeased you like the pic. I tooove random, seeming ordinary thingams that inspire higher thought. It was a beautiful 72f/22c , low himidity morning.
23rd Dec 2020 12:09pm
A pragmatist would know it's an optical illusion
a pessimistic would guard against the cat spilling it
and only a poet could convey what it truly is.
A very enjoyed piece, Bob
a pessimistic would guard against the cat spilling it
and only a poet could convey what it truly is.
A very enjoyed piece, Bob
23rd Dec 2020 11:15pm
Okay so you've gone and made me tear up. What a beautiful affirmation of who I aspire to be. And the cat thing was a definite possibility, he was out there with me. Thank you so much, my friend 🙏❤
23rd Dec 2020 7:06pm
Like BT said this is just gorgeous, the photo really amplifies the words so much. I love the optimistic message and all the possible reflections behind it. Beautiful stuff GW. :)
23rd Dec 2020 11:22pm
Dear Kristine, you know how pleased I am when you enjoy what I write and, in this case, the pic I snapped. You so inspire me I am glad to return the favor in my own tiny way. I am also glad this evoked
deeper variations of the reflection
deeper variations of the reflection
30th Dec 2020 00:20am
Dearest, B,
I'm a born pessimist so this hit me right where I much needed it to... what a lovely visual to accompany this beautifully written sentiment.
I must have overlooked the comment, Bad Blue!
All the best in the new year ahead, for you and yours and I'm so glad we stumbled across each other this year!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo.
B
I'm a born pessimist so this hit me right where I much needed it to... what a lovely visual to accompany this beautifully written sentiment.
I must have overlooked the comment, Bad Blue!
All the best in the new year ahead, for you and yours and I'm so glad we stumbled across each other this year!
Much love and respect,
🌹
xo.
B
