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~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
Written by
summultima
(uma)
Published 14th Dec 2020
| Edited 18th Dec 2020
Author's Note
#118 #ERULGCT Rob x
Also #NoPoo/ 141220/ 22:0539 & Admin Viz #NewYear (title may hint both at herd immunity & One-bonding in Love~ Art)
*Pic: self & web pics in fusion..
Also #NoPoo/ 141220/ 22:0539 & Admin Viz #NewYear (title may hint both at herd immunity & One-bonding in Love~ Art)
*Pic: self & web pics in fusion..
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Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
14th Dec 2020 10:34pm
For better or worse, nature will deliver doo. In the celluloid mist, touched by the hand of God, it does look like Plato's engraved face. Opening the blinds I am encountered by 2 gargoyles (statues, not a living thing you understand). Love me xx
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Re: Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
15th Dec 2020 5:22pm
whether it looks or not.. there or not doo... the truth , in all faith & love, is absolute, One. Not your or my or any version.. so no worries hurries ever.. lol those gargoyles vanishes to nothiongness in your summery bright infectious inner light I know :) Love me xx
Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
15th Dec 2020 6:37pm
The meanings seem densely woven here, beautifully subtle in their layerings, that I keep reading and seeing new things, like wave crests on the sea, they rise and then dissipate. Your write strikes me like a fever dream. Gorgeous and captivating.
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Re: Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
17th Dec 2020 6:04pm
Awwe Daniel.. Your words energize soulfully each tym I get your divine presence my soulful adored bright Poetic One in eternal bonding friendship.. I am humbled & in gratitudes for our bonds.. your light of words & presence is one of the main pillars as is Rob's Love.. for my scribbles & du's presence still... you know.. read all your wondrous comments on my latest scribbles .. will bve writing to you soonest . hope you taking care of yourself well & safe.. Light & Love Ev Dear :) xx💖🙏🔥✍
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19th Dec 2020 2:22am
Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
17th Dec 2020 3:23pm
The poem is comprised of long and complex words and as a result the rhythm is very stop-and-start, which isn’t necessarily a bad thing. You have a way with picking complex terms that come together to convey a certain mood. I’d be wary of placing your text in a picture, as some of it was hard to see.
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Re: Re. ~'herd-poetry' rea(p/d)ings
17th Dec 2020 6:09pm
I see & listen & imbibe in your lucid & straightly frank comments .. that are utmost constructive J.. I thank your appreciation in there & though love words & moreso the complex words that pack in a lot.. love simple & minimal words to do the same.. trying towards that sure.. true, there is some smudging effect.. the pic overall in the mergings .. will try to do something to coreect whatever way i can do best J.. Gratitudes much & loving your presence & posted poems .. love to read them all . light & love ev :) x