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indecisive
see a bloke in the café edging
nervously towards the door
but eventually plumping for the fish ..
Published 7th Dec 2020
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11th Dec 2020 3:05pm
i always adore how you capture in such engaging straight talk magnetism that is a rarity
I see tjis title & the content ..the doubts that is in each one's mind sticky lingering & in a risky to & fro.. these days of such isolations
..& of late, in minimal arts you excel . i see a sea of seamlessness in that one hinged centricness word/ phrase.. that tends towards all directions equally meaningfully.. such newness & stark poetics you do. shine on ev adored poet :)
I see tjis title & the content ..the doubts that is in each one's mind sticky lingering & in a risky to & fro.. these days of such isolations
..& of late, in minimal arts you excel . i see a sea of seamlessness in that one hinged centricness word/ phrase.. that tends towards all directions equally meaningfully.. such newness & stark poetics you do. shine on ev adored poet :)
11th Dec 2020 7:41pm
