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What I Need
When I think of you many things come to mind, like how you're sweet and kind, you are so caring and generous, you have everything in what I had only hoped to find, who would have thought we would end up becoming so serious.
I never in my wildest dreams thought that you would want me, but here we are together,you saw that there is more to me than what people see, there's no way I could dream of having another.
You have done something to me I will never be the same, you brought out the freak and inner beast, so come on baby tell me are you really game, you know you wanna see what I can take at least.
So go ahead now lay me down and slap my clit, oh yes please you know I want the whip, lower your head between my thighs to my slit, right there yea that's it lick it don't miss a sip.
Slip those fingers in my pussy's so wet, oh I want you to grind your hand until the whole fist is in, a good fist fucking is what I'll get, so oh yes please let's let the real fun begin.
Get me on all fours of this I ask of you please, slap my ass pull my hair that's what I need, so tell me now do you hear my pleas, make me beg for you to give me your creamy seed.
So grab me by my hips and ram your cock in hard and deep, fuck me like I've never been fucked before, fast and hard until our climax peek, and both exhausted and spent collapse on the floor.
I never in my wildest dreams thought that you would want me, but here we are together,you saw that there is more to me than what people see, there's no way I could dream of having another.
You have done something to me I will never be the same, you brought out the freak and inner beast, so come on baby tell me are you really game, you know you wanna see what I can take at least.
So go ahead now lay me down and slap my clit, oh yes please you know I want the whip, lower your head between my thighs to my slit, right there yea that's it lick it don't miss a sip.
Slip those fingers in my pussy's so wet, oh I want you to grind your hand until the whole fist is in, a good fist fucking is what I'll get, so oh yes please let's let the real fun begin.
Get me on all fours of this I ask of you please, slap my ass pull my hair that's what I need, so tell me now do you hear my pleas, make me beg for you to give me your creamy seed.
So grab me by my hips and ram your cock in hard and deep, fuck me like I've never been fucked before, fast and hard until our climax peek, and both exhausted and spent collapse on the floor.
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Re. What I Need
4th Dec 2020 11:38pm
As we said this is a tight piece, but enjoy love to it's fullest. We personally love the concept but we are us. We love when someone can write this and truly be in love, to tight
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5th Dec 2020 1:34am
Love will change a person and in most cases for the good and in my case let apart at me that's been lock away finally free lol
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5th Dec 2020 2:48am
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5th Dec 2020 7:30am
Sure a man would feel complimented by it, It gave me a ;raring to go' feeling LOL.
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5th Dec 2020 6:16pm
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7th Dec 2020 1:40am
Thank you so much for the read your comment is by far the best insight I have gotten these far. As a teen I got into writing as a way to let things out and then stopped writing for years as life got hectic and just couldn't find the time but I've started again I've forgotten how much I loved it
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8th Dec 2020 8:42pm
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2nd Jan 2021 8:31pm
.....an erotic wonderment where love has no boundaries is beautiful to see expressed in poetry. Your descriptive alluring write is an arousing celebration of yearning that we all strive for.... Thank you for sharing such raw sexual energy in verse. Incredible!!!!
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3rd Jan 2021 2:14am
Thank you for the read and comment. Love can make you step out of your comfort zone and want to try new things or so I've been told and learning lol
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"So come now baby, tell me you're game,
You know you wanna shout my name!"
YEAH BABY! ;-)
Sorry, bit of a Nibbly moment there. ;-)
You know you wanna shout my name!"
YEAH BABY! ;-)
Sorry, bit of a Nibbly moment there. ;-)
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18th Jan 2021 8:43pm
Re. What I Need
18th Jan 2021 8:53pm
I just think if your lover makes you feel this good then you really are onto a good thing. :-)
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19th Jan 2021 5:43am
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24th Jan 2023 8:02am
When it comes to woman to man
throwing caution to the wind can be good
sexing and that give and take
oh that sensation of hard wood
That deep feelings are factored in
marks the bond a cut above
no mistake in what is present
yes we can call it love
throwing caution to the wind can be good
sexing and that give and take
oh that sensation of hard wood
That deep feelings are factored in
marks the bond a cut above
no mistake in what is present
yes we can call it love
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24th Jan 2023 8:26am
Re. What I Need
21st Apr 2023 1:47am
I enjoyed reading your erotic poem
Writing more than wonderful
Your wild fantasies make us plunge into the passion of erotica that you have given us
peace and love
MP
Writing more than wonderful
Your wild fantasies make us plunge into the passion of erotica that you have given us
peace and love
MP
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Re. What I Need
26th Apr 2023 9:16pm
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26th Apr 2024 3:28pm
Wow Stephanie.. you really painted an erotic picture! I like your inner beast! ❤️🙂
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