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Allow me
Have me.
Have faith in me.
Appear translucent and fade for me.
Hold me.
Hold grudge for me.
Erase my clouded filth and touch me.
The time for hopes and wishes has passed.
The meaning of those are alien at best.
I like to see my future bright.
But darkness has consumed my light.
Let me guide you away from pain.
Cover my prints and follow the rain.
Have faith in me.
Appear translucent and fade for me.
Hold me.
Hold grudge for me.
Erase my clouded filth and touch me.
The time for hopes and wishes has passed.
The meaning of those are alien at best.
I like to see my future bright.
But darkness has consumed my light.
Let me guide you away from pain.
Cover my prints and follow the rain.
Published 23rd Nov 2020
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17th Dec 2020 7:23pm
22nd Dec 2020 3:47pm
Thanks for allowing me to make a comment--great poem--to the point. Peace. oral
24th Dec 2020 4:59pm
29th Dec 2020 4:13pm
Great poem, loved the rhyme. Look forward to more of our poems, talented one. Peace, oral
13th Jan 2021 5:08am
I think there is an honesty to your voice which is engaging. I tend to keep my rhyming sparse for impact, free verse has a more organic feel to it, is how I feel about it. Thank you for sharing with us.
29th Jan 2021 7:41pm
Unique, different, and meaningful. Thanks for sharing. Hugs and peace. oral
14th Sep 2022 1:22pm
21st Sep 2022 3:31am
It is exploring emotions of breaking out from what was to become something better.
