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A love Story From The Darker Side
Arriving at the gates
She stands
And she waits
Will they open today
Or will she turn
And walk away
Her eyes are aware
That all these cameras stare
Seeing her from every direction
How can he not see her perfection
From inside he peeks
At the woman he seeks
Standing there
Her skin so fair
When all of a sudden
He finds his courage
And presses the button
Opening the gates
He watches her
As she walks to her fate
She enters the house
Shy and quiet
Like a Mouse
Then does as she was told
Slowly, Seductively
Takes off her clothes
All of her he sees
As she enters the room
And lowers to her knees
Not yet knowing her fate
She sits perfectly for him
And again, she waits
When all of a sudden
She lets out a gasp
When enters the room
This tall man in black
Not a word is said
He walks slowly around her
Petting her head
She sits there still
As her thoughts float free
And she succumbs to his will
He stops in front of her
He squats with his hands on his thighs
Looks deep into her eyes
Realizing she could be his demise
Staring back at him
So confident, So Strong, So big
Yet knowing if she wanted
She could break him like a twig
The silence breaks as words pass his lips
"Why are you here"
"Sitting perfect like this"
She mutters back quietly
"this is where I want to be "
"I brought a gift for you sir"
"I wish to gift you me"
He does not break eye contact
And proudly Smiles
Dreams coming true
After all this while
That fateful night
They took a chance
That night they started
A long slow dance
Living, Loving Learning
Two hearts burning
Like most never will
Holding her close and keeping her safe
He loves her without condition
As she binds his heart and soul tight
inside her willful submission
She stands
And she waits
Will they open today
Or will she turn
And walk away
Her eyes are aware
That all these cameras stare
Seeing her from every direction
How can he not see her perfection
From inside he peeks
At the woman he seeks
Standing there
Her skin so fair
When all of a sudden
He finds his courage
And presses the button
Opening the gates
He watches her
As she walks to her fate
She enters the house
Shy and quiet
Like a Mouse
Then does as she was told
Slowly, Seductively
Takes off her clothes
All of her he sees
As she enters the room
And lowers to her knees
Not yet knowing her fate
She sits perfectly for him
And again, she waits
When all of a sudden
She lets out a gasp
When enters the room
This tall man in black
Not a word is said
He walks slowly around her
Petting her head
She sits there still
As her thoughts float free
And she succumbs to his will
He stops in front of her
He squats with his hands on his thighs
Looks deep into her eyes
Realizing she could be his demise
Staring back at him
So confident, So Strong, So big
Yet knowing if she wanted
She could break him like a twig
The silence breaks as words pass his lips
"Why are you here"
"Sitting perfect like this"
She mutters back quietly
"this is where I want to be "
"I brought a gift for you sir"
"I wish to gift you me"
He does not break eye contact
And proudly Smiles
Dreams coming true
After all this while
That fateful night
They took a chance
That night they started
A long slow dance
Living, Loving Learning
Two hearts burning
Like most never will
Holding her close and keeping her safe
He loves her without condition
As she binds his heart and soul tight
inside her willful submission
Published 22nd Nov 2020
| Edited 4th Jan 2025
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22nd Nov 2020 10:15pm
Wow... I'm melting at the delicately written romance and enticed by the deliciously stated Dominance. It's such a heady dichotomy and a true sensual, erotic and loving elixir.
You wrote this beautifully, Swagger.
Some of your best that I've read.
Your angel is a lucky lady to have found her Dom and soulmate and obvious vice versa.
So worthy of my RL add.... and compliments galore...
💜
xoxo
B
You wrote this beautifully, Swagger.
Some of your best that I've read.
Your angel is a lucky lady to have found her Dom and soulmate and obvious vice versa.
So worthy of my RL add.... and compliments galore...
💜
xoxo
B
22nd Nov 2020 11:52pm
Thank you sooooo much blue
I have not written in awhile and forced myself this afternoon to get something down on paper.
I am glad you enjoyed the read, I know when it comes to my writing I am all over the map and you never really know what your gonna get when you open the door, but thank you for being one who opens the door and peeks in consistently
Your thoughts, interpretations, and always kind words are appreciated
I have not written in awhile and forced myself this afternoon to get something down on paper.
I am glad you enjoyed the read, I know when it comes to my writing I am all over the map and you never really know what your gonna get when you open the door, but thank you for being one who opens the door and peeks in consistently
Your thoughts, interpretations, and always kind words are appreciated
23rd Nov 2020 7:09am
23rd Nov 2020 7:53am
23rd Nov 2020 12:55pm
great write, i felt every word in this beautiful piece of art that you shared with us. I know she sees you as a king.
23rd Nov 2020 10:49pm
Thank you so much for these encouraging kind words
I am glad you enjoyed this one
I am glad you enjoyed this one
24th Nov 2020 4:37pm
Such a gorgeous sensual write. Beautifully immersive imagery and absolutely lovely expression of love. Your ability to capture the relationship between the masculine and the feminine is stunning. Your lady is blessed to receive, and give, such endearing love.
Being submissive is truly exquisite in the hands of a skilled and loving man. :)
Being submissive is truly exquisite in the hands of a skilled and loving man. :)
Thank you so much Kristina
Glad you enjoyed this write
The bonds created within this dynamic when done right are beyond compare
Thanks again for your consistent encouragement
Glad you enjoyed this write
The bonds created within this dynamic when done right are beyond compare
Thanks again for your consistent encouragement
29th Nov 2020 10:53am
Ooh I liked this bit especially. "They took a chance
That night they started
A long slow dance "
Nice poem Swagger xx
That night they started
A long slow dance "
Nice poem Swagger xx
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